Your language is very poetic and sophisticated and has the "Silmarillion feel" to it without sounding ridiculous, which is hard to do! I look forward to the continuation of this piece, as the time about which you write is so intensely interesting.

And no worries ... the story looks perfect. :) Do let me know if you have any trouble figuring out how to use the site, but it looks like you got posting a story just fine!

Take care,
Dawn

Hi Anlashaq,

And thank you for writing a piece that I thoroughly enjoyed.

I particularly like the part where Sauron realises he will not forge the One Ring without a greater fire. Very nicely done!

I also love your language, very much in the spirit of your intent to be true to the original. Congratulations on a job well done.

I'm glad it's unfinished, because I look forward to reading more...