If I were a wood elf... by Robinka
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Summary: A poem in response to the 2009 Back to Middle Earth Month, Day Seventh: "In the woods". Major Characters: Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: B2MeM 2009 Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 104 |
Posted on 11 March 2009 | Updated on 11 March 2009 |
This fanwork is complete. |
If I were a wood elf...
Thanks to Lissa for her suggestions :)
Read If I were a wood elf...
Hear the whispers of the wood!
See the smiles of starlit sky!
Those wonders I understood
The moment I opened my eyes.
Under the skies where stars roam
Lies the home of the Grey Folk,
Bound to Arda and her bones,
And paths unnumbered that I walk.
There is beauty to behold
In ageless trees that have breathed
Here since the times of old
And praised the One that made us live.
Mankind passes, swift in pace,
One mere glimpse, and they are gone.
I have all ages to face
Forever, like Earth's rock and stone.
And if our lives cross at times,
By the doings bad or good,
All will be saved in the rhymes
Within the whispers of the wood.
(1) Comment by Dawn Felagund for If I were a wood elf...
Binka, this is gorgeous! It flows wonderfully and the meter is superb! (Meter is my weakness in poetry, so I notice anyone who does it really well! :) I can almost hear this poem being sung along with a wooden flute and drums. Very nice!
Re: (1) Comment by Dawn Felagund for If I were a wood elf...
Wow! Thank you :D *does a mad dance of joy* I'm so glad I did manage to make it sound "wood-elfy" :) Thank you very much for reading and commenting!
(2) Comment by whitewave for If I were a wood elf...
I can easily imagine the wood elves singing the lines for lyrics.
Re: (2) Comment by whitewave for If I were a wood elf...
Thank you :D
(3) Comment by SurgicalSteel for If I were a wood elf...
This was lyrical and lovely!
Re: (3) Comment by SurgicalSteel for If I were a wood elf...
Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment :) I'm glad that you liked it.
(4) Comment by Rhapsody for If I were a wood elf...
Oh, I like this a lot and it feels so natural for an elf to feel so attuned to nature instead of singing to the stars. A song of joy a dedication to that which will always accompany them: the trees. What I so like is how you made this full circle: from the joyful opening of the eyes, the 'drinking in' of nature to the more solemn last lines where all that they know will be confined in the memories of the wood (in a way). Masterfully crafted Binks!
Re: (4) Comment by Rhapsody for If I were a wood elf...
Thank you so much, Rhaps, for your wonderful comment :D I'm happy that you liked the poem, and sorry for being so late with a response. Thank you!
(5) Comment by pandemonium_213 for If I were a wood elf...
Like Dawn said, the meter is excellent, and that is no small feat, at least for me! The care with which you chose your words is more than evident. The poem as a whole captures the essence of the wood elf -- a timeless connection to the greater part of Nature.
Wonderful work, Binka!
Re: (5) Comment by pandemonium_213 for If I were a wood elf...
Thank you! :) I'm very happy to see that my idea of what a wood elf might think or say about the world around him worked. It seemed fitting to compose these thoughts in a poem. Thank you so very much again, and sorry that I have not responded for such a long time.