A Ponderous Tome by oshun

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Summary:

A short character study of a youthful Elrond and a reflection on an aspect of his relationship with Maedhros and Maglor; in response to Day 26 of the B2MeM challenge. The prompt is: “a teacher who played a key role . . . . write a character who educated his people in some way.”

MEFA 2009,  Third Place - First Age and Prior:
Featuring Maedhros or Maglor
Tree and Flower Awards 2013, First Place
Favorite Characerization of Elrond

Major Characters: Elrond, Elros, Maedhros, Maglor

Major Relationships:

Genre: General

Challenges: Ankle Biters, B2MeM 2009

Rating: General

Warnings:

This fanwork belongs to the series

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 1, 082
Posted on 26 March 2009 Updated on 26 March 2009

This fanwork is complete.

A Ponderous Tome

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Elros poised on the edge of his chair, leaning forward slightly, obviously listening to Maglor. Elrond, on the other hand, had slouched so low that he practically balanced himself on the middle of his spine and stared out of the window. A few low-hanging clouds moved almost imperceptibly across a leaden sky. The only thing that could be duller than reading about thousands of years of nothing happening, while the Eldar moved farther west, were the ridiculously detailed descriptions of how they began, ever so ponderously slowly, to separate and assume unique cultural and physical traits.

Off in the distance, over the water, some seabirds circled. They probably had spotted a school of fish. Immediately next to the window, a sparrow hopped from one branch to another. Dull, annoyingly cheerful birds. Maglor asked Elros another question. Irritation had ratcheted Maglor's voice higher. Elros stammered for a second in his response, until he realized that it was Elrond's inattention that caused Maglor's frustration and nothing he had said.

Sensing his foster-father's eyes on the side of his face, Elrond rubbed his cheek and yawned. Had the prickling of his skin resulted from an overactive imagination and knowing Maglor must have noticed his inattention or had Maglor actually caused it?

Elrond glanced around in time to notice that the tension in Maglor's voice had stopped Maedhros in his tracks just outside of the door. Maedhros backed up and frowned into the room. Elrond thought, here comes trouble.

Maglor released a drained sigh, dropping his shoulders and pinching the bridge of his nose. "Thank you, Elros. You covered all of the major events. I liked the way you noted the shifting alliances among the different branches of the Eldar during that period. Your writing is improving as well, more concise and better organized. Good work." He glared at Elrond. "Did you begin your paper yet? Have you even read the book?"

"I'm almost through it. He's an impossible writer. It's torture reading him." Elrond sighed deeply, shooting a glance at Maedhros looming tall and regal in the doorway. He decided that to put on a show of good behavior because Maedhros was listening would be completely cowardly and dishonest.

Elrond could read Maedhros's displeasure in the tightening of the muscles around his mouth. He was certain to intervene. He probably wanted to jerk him up into a proper sitting position by the back of his shirt and thump him on the head, the way cook sometimes did. Of course, Maedhros would never do that. But Elrond knew he had a temper.

"Good afternoon," Maedhros said, formal, almost courtly in demeanor. "Cook is holding lunch for the three of you. Macalaurë, why don't you and Elros go ahead. Elrond and I will be along in a moment."

Finally pulling himself into an outright position in his chair, Elrond looked at Maedhros, undecided whether to resort to humor and charm or capitulate outright and make a straightforward apology.

He took a middle ground and, sighing again, said, "I know what you are going to say."

"Oh you do, do you? I wonder. Let me see the book, please." Maedhros held his hand out. Taking it, he turned the bound volume over and looked at the spine. "Excellent source. He knew his material. Much of it first hand and he knew whom to consult to verify the rest. He traveled widely both in Aman and here."

"Knew?" Elrond asked, intrigued.

"Yes. Past tense. He was killed in an ambush by orcs, the next thing to a freakish accident, several decades ago. A great loss."

"I'm sorry," Elrond said, sincere. "Did you know him well?"

"No. Only by reputation and his work. I met him briefly, maybe twice, in Valinor."

"He certainly was not a poet."

"No. And his manner was as colorless as the way he wrote. But he was a fine historian. Able to look at more than one side of a question. Macalaurë, on the other hand, is a poet. And, even more so, an astonishing musical genius. I am sure you, young as you are, recognize that. He composes far less these days than he would like. Macalaurë is not a schoolmaster. Yet he divides his time between helping me with various administrative tasks and ensuring that you and your brother have an education equal to that of those schooled in Tirion under circumstances much more advantageous to study."

"Yes, my lord." Elrond felt his cheeks burn with shame.

"My lord?" Maedhros laughed. He didn't laugh often, but when he did, Elrond appreciated why he was considered to be so comely.

"So you understand my points?" Maedhros pursed his lips together in order to restrain a grin.

"Absolutely clearly. Don't judge a scholar by his pedantic prose. And stop being an arrogant, inconsiderate ass with Macalaurë."

Maedhros startled him by grabbing his upper arm and pulling him out of his chair and onto his feet. Cocking his head to one side and studying him as though he tried to read straight into his heart, Maedhros, at last, said, "You'll be fine, Elrond." He pulled Elrond into his arms like he so often had when he was a mere child, ruffling his hair in the same annoying way, oddly comforting though. "Actually, you often remind me of Macalaurë when he was young. Although your harp playing is crap and you haven't much of a voice. Perhaps if tedious writing bothers you so much, you might consider working at becoming a decent writer yourself."

"I like to write."

Maedhros raised an eyebrow, in skepticism or amusement Elrond was not sure. "Maybe I'll take on the two of you for history for a while. Don't repeat this, but it was never Macalaurë's best subject. I really do not have his patience for nonsense though, I warn you."

"Would you?" Elrond cringed inwardly at how his voice squeaked in obvious enthusiasm. Some of the most compelling histories they had read, had been written by Maedhros himself in Tirion, before his self-imposed exile, before he became a warrior and a dispossessed wanderer.

"Come along. They must be hungry."

That had not been so bad, Elrond thought, as they walked down the hall together, easy and relaxed. Then Maedhros paused and faced him. "One last thing, Elrond, you are not brighter than your brother either. He simply approaches tasks differently than you do."

"Thanks," Elrond answered. Stunningly inarticulate, he told himself, while realizing he truly was grateful and hoped that Maedhros knew that.


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Oh, this is a wonderful story! I love how it isn't Elros that gets in trouble for not paying attention, as most stories I've read have the twins in the opposing roles. It's especially ironic because of Elrond's later role as a loremaster.

Don’t judge a scholar by his turgid prose. And stop being an arrogant, inconsiderate ass with Macalaurë.”

Favorite line of the piece!

Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it; I had my own logic behind seeing Elrond as the more easily distractable. From teaching school, having kids of my own, and coming from a huge family, my observation has been that the extremely bright kids, who had the most success academically later were often the ones who were most easily bored early on.

I enjoyed reading this. I liked the glimpse into young Elrond's life. You dialogue was a lot of fun, and very clever. I liked seeing Elrond and Elros together as children, and the last lines of this were brilliant. This was very well written and enjoyable to read, a great interpretation of the prompt I think. :-)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I’m very happy it worked for you and especially that you liked the dialogue. I love to write dialogue. I also love these characters together; like to imagine what their interactions were like. Elrond and Elros turned out to well for me to think that was pure luck and had nothing to do with their caretakers.

I've read this twice and could not get enough of it.  I enjoyed how you fleshed out Elrond's character here and his interaction with the brothers.  I would like to think that Elrond being "as kind as summer" much later in life was also derived in part (even a little bit) from the "fell Fëanorians".  The twins would have or must have gotten something from spending time with them.

It is also fun to see Elrond in a new, more mischievous light. My favorite was the line: "...do not judge a scholar by his turgid prose, and stop being an arrogant, inconsiderate ass with Macalaurë."

I liked your Maedhros here as well and it just struck me that he would have made a good father if he had kids (and maybe "partly-raising" six younger brothers did the trick). 

Elrond the teenager, bored with dry prose and stale history - oh, I'll buy it, it's so very teenage (IIRC).

His shame when he realizes that real people wrote the dry books; that his teacher makes sacrifices so that Elrond may gain the advantage of a good education - this part of your story really touched me and also seemed very much in character. Perhaps this is where Elrond begins to grow up, become the 'kind as summer' loremaster.

And the way he regards Maedhros... there's more than a little hero worship here, which also makes perfect sense.  *g*

 

This is really nice :) I like your neat characterisation and portrayal of young Elrond. Who would have thought a great lord like him could have been so petulant in his youth? Your suggestion of what Maedhros may have done in Tirion was interesting, too. I'd never really thought about it before :)

Thank you so much. I really appreciate the comments. I think Elrond was a survivor, so he must have a strong personality. I think Maedhros and Maglor also must have taken good care for the two of them, because they turned out all right. Actually, case of fostering that amount almost to hostages in a political sense in our own world during the Middle-ages was not uncommon and the bonds that were formed often ended in promoting life-long attachments. So I've never seen the so-called kidnapping of those two youngsters as a horrible fate.

Thank you so much. That means a lot to me that you like Elrond here. I actually fell in love with Elrond before I even knew his life story--way back when I first read Lord of the Rings. I hope I can write more of him. I also have a fondness for Elrond and Maedhros having a different and oft times more contradictory relationship than that of Maglor and Elrond. But basically in my verse, Elrond admires Maedhros and sees a lot in him that even Maedhros doesn't realize is showing.

Lovely story. Great characterization of Elrond and I love his interaction with Maedhros. For all their faults Maglor and Maedhros must have been good with children--they had so much experience at home. Elrond and Elros certainly did not have good parents--likely credit should go to their foster father's for how the twins turned out!

Thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed the story. I really agree with you about Maedhros, Maglor, and the children. I grew up in a family of seven siblings and hoards of cousins and was somewhat shocked to find that in the wider world, it had pretty much made me an expert at how to care for them and keep them happy, not to mention having a very high personal tolerance for the little creatures.