The Feast of Reuniting by oshun

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B2MeM 2011 March 10 Gondolin - Gondolin Passport Stamp

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Summary:

Written to the prompt to start a story with Charles Dickens' opening line from A Tale of Two Cities: "It was the best of times, it was the worst of times." (Perhaps, it could be read as a non-spoilery trailer for my Mereth Aderthad.)

Major Characters: Daeron, Maglor

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Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Drama, General

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Rating: General

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This fanwork belongs to the series

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 449
Posted on 7 April 2011 Updated on 7 April 2011

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Chapter 1

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Written in fulfillment of the prompt: start a story with Charles Dickens' opening line from A Tale of Two Cities.


It was the best of times, it was the worst of times; it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness; it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity; it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness; it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair; we had everything before us, we had nothing before us. Never since they had left Valinor had Maglor noticed among his people a greater hope for good things to follow. That hope flowed thick and heavy in the veins of the Noldor at the end of the Feast of Reuniting. It was Maglor who took upon himself the task to sing of those events. He would record for generations to come that hope, as well as the fears and triumphs of those days.

The Noldor were never a malleable or sentimental people. True they had lived soft in Aman and accepted the protection and the schooling of the Valar like housebroken pups for the long part of an Age until they could take the chafing no longer. Their breaking free and the Valar’s revocation of their privileges as cosseted pets had not weakened them. The threats that had been made against them forced them to stand up straight and tall, caused each of them to metaphorically throw his shoulders back and grasp his sword's hilt in an artist’s hand, but the hand of a craftsman is calloused and strong.

He would remember to include all of that in his music. There would be need to sing of the sadness and regret, but the bliss would have to be told as well. And this convocation in the wilderness amongst the pools of crystalline water, in this place of haunting and haunted beauty, of still lakes and rushing falls, would stand matchless in the catalog of those moments of joy. But, always behind the hope lay the memory of Namo’s curse and the realization ever clearer with each passing year that they were here to stay. The cost would be inestimable. He did not need the vengeful words of the Doom of Mandos to tell him that. To build, to organize, to defend, and eventually to overcome, those were their goals.

That last night of the formal gathering at the pools of Ivrin Maglor lifted his lap harp into his arms. He let ring a single shining chord and smiled before he began to sing. Daeron met his ardent gaze with glistening eyes and smiled back before joining his voice with that of Maglor.


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Copy of my MEFA review:

I love this story because it is by Oshun, with all that implies, and because it is about Maglor, who is one of the Noldor I am most interested in anyway. The feast in question is the celebration twenty years after the first Rising of the Sun at the Eithel Ivrin, the pools at the source of the Narog at the foot of the Mountains of Shadow, to which Fingolfin summoned elves from all over Beleriand; Sindar and Green-Elves came as well as Noldor, and it is the one occasion on which we can assume that Maglor met Daeron and they heard each other sing. The piece is part of Oshun's "Maitimo and Findekano" series, which is a favourite of mine, and especially closely linked to her Work-in-Progress "Mereth Aderthad", which I hope she will finish soon, because I can't wait to read the next chapter. Oshun's Noldor are strong, courageous, generous, independent-minded, determined, and highly motivated. Here she has condensed all the qualities that I admire about them into one short ficlet. Maglor is, of course, known for writing the Noldolante, which is, according to the "Silmarillion", a famous lament on the subject of the Downfall of Noldor. Here his determination is described to write about hope and joy as well as about the inevitable high price to be paid for the Noldorin venture into Beleriand and those disasters that have already happened since their departure. The piece was originally written for Back-to-Middle-Earth Month 2011, and the challenge for that particular day was to start a story with the opening line of Dickens's "A Tale of Two Cities". Oshun has done more than that; she has gone back to Dickens's work and used the following sentences, too, and she has made them work really well.

For reasons I can't fathom, the possibility of Maglor and Daeron being at the same party never quite resgistred with me. I really like the idea though the fic is of course centered on other things. The idea of the Noldolante having been anything other than sad is great. I can't really imagine those proud Noldor thinking all their work/fighting for nought entirely, even if their lives were tragedy stricken. You don't keep building kingdoms and organizing armies if that is all you believe. 

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading and reviewing!

<I>You don't keep building kingdoms and organizing armies if that is all you believe.</i>

Seriously! That conception is what started me writing in the first place. One cannot do what the Noldor did in the First Age without buckets full of hope! Thank you so much again.