A Promise Kept by chrissystriped

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Fanwork Notes

warnings: blood, injuries

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Mablung leaves Doriath on the eve of the Nirnaeth Arnoediad.

Major Characters: Mablung, Thranduil

Major Relationships: Mablung & Thranduil

Genre: Ficlet, General

Challenges: Manwë's Mailbag

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Check Notes for Warnings

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 542
Posted on 29 November 2022 Updated on 29 November 2022

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A Promise Kept

Written for this postcard prompt.

The sun shines through the green leaves of the trees standing over a small river. A bridge can be seen between them.

Text: Shall we walk here again and cross the bridge in sunlight?

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The sun was standing low in the west, shining through the trees and coating everything in a green-golden light. The weather was almost obscenely cheerful for this grim day, Mablung thought as he crossed the bridge over Esgalduin. He gripped the strap of his bag tighter and rested his spear on his shoulder. Beleg was waiting for him on the border, they would travel north together. North and to battle. To a battle that would very likely decide the future of the whole of Beleriand.

“Mablung, wait!”

Mablung sighed and turned around.

“Take me with you.” Thranduil was wearing his armour, a bow in his hand, a quiver full of arrows on his belt.

“Not this time, kid.”

“I’m not a child anymore!” Thranduil glowered at him and Mablung hid a smile.

“You are right, Thranduil, you’ve grown into a fine man”, he said. “That’s why I need you to understand that you can’t come with me. Thingol forbids everyone to join Maedhros’s Union. Beleg and me go against his wishes in this. You don’t want to defy your king, do you? Besides, your father would have my head, if I let you come with me.”

“And how is it, that you can defy the king?”, Thranduil challenged, stepping onto the bridge.

“Beleg and I, we are Unbegotten. Thingol knows we are loyal to him, he also knows there are things he can’t forbid us to do. This is one of them. We will fight, we won’t hide behind the Queens Girdle while the Noldor fight a war that is not only theirs.”

“But you expect me to?”

“Yes!” Mablung walked back and laid his hand on Thranduil’s cheek. The kid had never seen a real battle. Border skirmishes, yes, but nothing like the battles in the starbright dark before the sun and moon. He knew it was useless to tell him war was more dirt and blood than glory and honour. “I ask you to stay.”

There were tears in Thranduil’s eyes. “Will you come back?”, he asked.

“Yes.” Mablung kissed his forehead gently.

“Do you promise.”

“I promise”, Mablung answered, although he knew he shouldn’t.

 

They were fleeing out of the ruin of what later would be called the Nirnaeth Arnoediad. They were both injured. Beleg had a deep wound in his leg and was only upright because he was leaning heavily on Mablung, his arm thrown around his shoulders.

Mablung wiped the blood out of his eye. He had a gash on his forehead that wouldn’t stop bleeding and many shallow wounds all over his body. He’d put a tourniquet around Beleg’s leg, but there hadn’t been time to bind their wounds properly. They needed to get away first. South, as far south as their strength would last. He was not sure, Beleg was still concious.

Mablung thought of Thranduil standing on the bridge bathed in golden evening light and held that picture in his mind. He’d made a promise. They would stand on that bridge again. He would come back and he would make sure Beleg also came back. And Thranduil would smile at him because he’d kept his promise.


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I like that that promise he gave Thranduil gives him additional strength and motivation to escape and make his way back.

Also an interesting explanation why it was just those two who went to the battle (and why Thranduil and the others couldn't).

Knowing that Thranduil is at home, waiting for him to return, helps Mablung to hold on to the last bit of strength he has. If it weren't for Beleg needing him to drag him out and the memory of the promise he gave Thranduil, he might not be able to go on.

Thanks! Those two can get away with a lot more than anyone else. They were around before he became king and he knows he can't make them stay with their relationship staying intact.

Aww! Young Thranduil! I like how just at the words "Take me with you." Thranduil is clearly still a child, and I love their interaction, the feels of both of them are so palpable. And Mablung is right, he shouldn't promise, and yet we all make those hope-filled promises.

I don't know if there's canon evidence that I've missed for Mablung also being unbegotten, but I love that they both are, here, and the fact that that's the reason they can choose for themselves what to do has made me think about what it is that gives a king the right to dictate what any subject can and can't do — lots of complexities there!

I get such big feels with the graphic image of them escaping, both wounded, and the image in Mablung's mind of Thranduil on the bridge and the thought of seeing him again giving him added strength to get them both home.

Lovely use of both elements of the prompts here!

Thranduil is still very young, but Mablung knows he has to treat him like the grown-up he insists he is, or this is going to turn into a huge argument.

You didn't miss anything (at least I don't know any canon source either), I made that up, because it fit with the reason I made up for them being able to go ;). Beleg and Mablung are old, they were around before Thingol (or Olwe, for that matter), became the king. They decided to stay with him, protect him and their people. But they will sometimes do what they think is right, even if it goes against Thingol's wishes and Thingol knows he has to accept that, if he wants them to stay in Doriath.

Thank you so much for your comment. Your photo is so beautiful and it was a bright light in a rather (weather-wise) dark, grey week.