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They seem to be rather skilled at evading the fatal conversation - and evading me trying to write it, but we'll get there. Thank you for the review. :)

(Good catch! Asgarvain's knowledge about the Telerin girl will be explained later, so it's not an oversight, it's an intentional omission. Consider this a teaser.)

Elleth, I really like this! Your OCs give this version of Arda a greater richness than it otherwise would have, definitely. I love the insights we get about the sort of people who would (still) choose to follow the brothers Feanorian. And it has great atmosphere, the wintery setting sort of breathes over you.