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LadySternchen has requested the following types of constructive criticism on this fanwork: Characterization, Conflict, Description/Imagery, Fulfilled Intent, Mood/Tone, Organization/Structure, Pacing, Plot, Point of View, Research, Sensitivity Read, Setting, Spelling, Grammar, and Mechanics, Style, Worldbuilding. All constructive criticism must follow our diplomacy guidelines.


There is no reason at all why you shouldn't make a chapter per prompt! The Matryoshka challenges get done in all sort of ways.

I think you have been handling the prompts  well, applying them to your chosen theme.

I enjoyed the conversation with Beren in the first chapter, in particular, and the scene with Melian was interesting.