Betrayed by LadySternchen

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Fanwork Notes

These prompts really almost defied me ;-) I made each a chapter, knowing that isn't usually how those Matryoshka-challenges work. Anyway, I tried my best...

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Lúthien thinks she can trust her best friend- until she is proven wrong. 

Major Characters: Lúthien Tinúviel

Major Relationships: Daeron & Lúthien

Genre: General

Challenges: Secret Gate

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 5 Word Count: 4, 449
Posted on 14 July 2023 Updated on 26 July 2023

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Table of Contents

Disguise
Wronged
Annoyed
Doomed

I borrowed Melian's words from the Book of Lost Tales II here...

Again

Comments on Betrayed

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There is no reason at all why you shouldn't make a chapter per prompt! The Matryoshka challenges get done in all sort of ways.

I think you have been handling the prompts  well, applying them to your chosen theme.

I enjoyed the conversation with Beren in the first chapter, in particular, and the scene with Melian was interesting.