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Escribí esto porque las Musas no me dejaban en paz. Querían porque querían que estos dos se involucraran en Español. Así que sólo obedezco a su voluntad caprichosa.

Esta historia fue escrita íntegramente teniendo a Depedro como banda sonora - el título, de hecho, viene de la canción Tu Mediodía.

La inclusión del Palantír en esta historia fue tomada de la magnifica The Revolutionary and the Usurper, de Encairion.

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Summary:

Fëanáro era Rey. Nolofinwë lo había aceptado mucho antes del asesinato de su padre. 

Major Characters: Fëanor, Fingolfin

Major Relationships: Fëanor & Fingolfin, Fëanor/Fingolfin

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Drama, Romance, Slash

Challenges:

Rating: Adult

Warnings: Expletive Language, Incest, Sexual Content (Graphic)
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 4, 523
Posted on 21 November 2023 Updated on 21 November 2023

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Volver a empezar

No soy, como se notará, nativa en Español, aunque a mi se me dá relativamente fácil. Así que si hay algún error gramatical, por favor, decídmelo y os lo agradeceré.

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(all hail google translate lol)

So much tension, so much suspicion and distrust... *chef's kiss*

and I loved the reference to the Palantír!!  I know they don't actually show up in the Silm but they're so overlooked as devices, let alone even background flavor.   This was a really fantastic element <3

Ah you're an angel for taking a shot at this monster thing - and in Spanish no less! Well, you know just how much I love writing these two, so I'm really happy that even in another language you could feel the tension of it all. As for the Palantír, I completely forgot to make a note that this is, in fact, 100% stolen from Encairion LOL. It was her idea that inspired me in the first place - though I'm still glad it worked here, too! Thank you so much for this lovely comment, my friend!

I have thought that Feanor must have brought at least some Palantiri with him to Beleriand, even if never explicitly stated.  I mused once that Maedhros gave some to Fingolfin as part of the compensation (like he did with the horses) and that is how the realms of the Noldor kept in close contact.  It explains how things like the Nirnaeth was coordinated or how Turgon knew of it, things like that.  Regardless, it's a fantastic detail that I am delighted to see used!  I like that you used it almost like Galadriel's mirror, to see a possibility ahead (even if it is his own actions end up bringing them about).