Comments on Sounds of War

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The terse sentences are very effective and really enhance the mood. Great choice for the prompt.

I'm glad you think so! 

I was worried they would seem too disconnected and stumbly. I read it back and felt like I was tripping on cobblestones in high heels (which experience tells me is not a fun combination XD)

So I'm very happy to hear that this was a case of "we are our own harshest critic"