Sounds of War by daughterofshadows

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Fanwork Notes

Another Dark Matter prompt, this time, I wasn't allowed to use commas, and oh dear, that was difficult.

I love my subclauses fiercely.

But I did it! 100 words without a single comma!

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Summary:

An army marches to the War of Wrath.

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Challenges: Dark Matter

Rating: General

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Chapters: 1 Word Count: 100
Posted on 22 February 2025 Updated on 22 February 2025

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The terse sentences are very effective and really enhance the mood. Great choice for the prompt.

I'm glad you think so! 

I was worried they would seem too disconnected and stumbly. I read it back and felt like I was tripping on cobblestones in high heels (which experience tells me is not a fun combination XD)

So I'm very happy to hear that this was a case of "we are our own harshest critic"