The Snakes and the Flowers by Lyra

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Summary:

A young Vanyarin poet makes some clever observations, the relevance of which only grows apparent in good time.
Inspired by Oshun's character biography of Barahir, and written for the "New Directions" challenge... and a different character altogether.

Major Characters: Amarië

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Challenges: New Directions

Rating: General

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Chapters: 2 Word Count: 1, 257
Posted on 6 July 2017 Updated on 2 August 2017

This fanwork is a work in progress.

Chapter 1

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„Well?“ he asked, his eyes bright with excitement. „How did you like it?“

Amárië had to suppress a giggle. She had expected to be invited to a theatrical performance, or a concert, or a walk through a pleasant garden. Instead, Findaráto had asked her to accompany him to a session of the Noldorin council. As far as she was aware, that was a rather unusual pastime for a rendez-vous, although perhaps things were different among the Noldor. They had not even spent the past hour close together: She had been sitting on one of the cushioned benches for observers, and he had taken his place among the junior members of the royal family. He had watched the proceedings and made the occasional respectful remark, while she had watched his lovely profile, the elegant manner in which his hand cupped his chin, the attentive way in which he leaned forward, the sparkle in his eyes as his focus shifted from one speaker to the next. The discussions among the king and his councillors – about Noldorin matters, like the appointment of craftsmen for repair work on the city's sewage and the building of a new guild hall, about a mining expedition to the northern mountains, about improvements to be made to the postal system – had for the most part bored Amárië, though she had enjoyed observing Findaráto's enthusiasm. And now, he asked her how she had liked it, as if it had been a celebrated new play or a poetry recital.

She wanted to give a clever answer – the Noldor prized cleverness, that much she knew – but all she could think of was, „It was very educative.“ She tried to remember anything specific that had been said, something that might be quoted and elaborated upon, but the most striking thing that came to mind was the mood among the councillors, the invisible lines between different factions, the animosity that had occasionally drifted to the surface of their otherwise cultured discourse. „It was strange to see the enmity between the lords Nolofinwë and Fëanáro,“ she finally said, deciding to treat them like characters in a play whose actions and motivations were open for discussion. „I had the impression that even when they held the same opinion, they needed to fight about it. Whenever one of them made a point, the other had to make it better. And whenever one of them disagreed, he needed to annihilate the other's reasoning altogether. As if they couldn't be in the same room without fighting. If that's how they act when there are only minor things to discuss, I shudder to imagine what it would be like when there is some seriously controversial matter.“

„Ah, yes,“ Findaráto said, sighing. „You are touching upon a sore spot. My half-uncle – is that even a word? - just can't bear it when my uncle is right; he always needs to be more right.“
The giggle that Amárië had earlier bitten back forced its way outside now. „But it also works the other way around,“ she couldn't help pointing out. „Your uncle always wanted to have the last word, too. And everybody else trying to accomodate them, and your father trying to keep them from tearing each other to pieces...“ She shook her head. „It must be quite exasperating for the King. They remind me of two snakes fighting about the same prey, like...“ She had been about to say 'a marmot', because she had indeed seen two snakes fight over a marmot on the slopes of Taniquetil once, but then she realised that comparing the commonwealth of the Noldor to a furry little burrower might be a little insulting. How did you signify a nation, anyway? „A crown,“ she said at last, and because she couldn't imagine why snakes should fight over jewellery, she added, „of flowers. Whenever one of them has hold of it, the other tries to devour it.“ It was a silly story – snakes ate other animals, not flowers – but it was an amusing metaphor nonetheless. She went on, „and Lord Arafinwë is the snake charmer, I suppose.“ Suddenly, she remembered that she was not talking about characters in a play or archetypes in a poem, but the very real family of the young man who had only just begun to court her. She bit her lip, embarrassed, and peered at him to figure out whether he was much offended.

But Findaráto, whose good cheer had temporarily flagged at the topic of his competitive uncles, was smiling broadly again. „You are a true poet, Amárië,“ he announced, his face suddenly very close to hers. She had looked into his bright, gentle eyes for a moment; and then they had finally kissed.

Chapter 2

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„A snake charmer, am I?“
Amárië could not say whether Lord Arafinwë was angry or merely curious. She tried to meet his gaze – the steely grey of the Noldor, not the summery blue of his mother's eyes - without fear or guilt. Or annoyance at the fact that her private observation had somehow made it to the ears of Findaráto's father, for that matter.
„It seemed like a good description at the time,“ she said cautiously. „Of course, it is not meant to be taken literally.“ She half-turned, giving Findaráto a pointed look. „It was not meant to be made public, either.“

Findaráto had the grace of looking down, abashed, but just as quickly he raised his head again. „I know. But it was too apt to ignore. I just had to make something of it. Look!“ Grinning, he held out his hand, and Amárië could see gold glinting on his finger where one would normally wear a signet ring. It was indeed a ring. But instead of a simple band bearing a seal matrix, it was shaped in the likeness of two snakes that were coiled around each other, one's head ending at the other's tail. Both appeared to have sunk their fangs into a wreath of flowers that formed the centrepiece of the ring: they might have been upholding it, or tearing it apart. It was quite masterfully crafted, each petal and stem clearly recogniseable; the bodies of the snakes suggesting their writhing muscles and brute strength even in miniature, and their emerald eyes were glinting with a semblance of life.
„I had Uncle Fëanáro make it for me,“ Findaráto said proudly.

Amárië blinked. „I hope you didn't tell him that he's one of the snakes,“ she said.
„Of course not! No need to worry. I don't think he figured it out himself, either – he's quite immune to self-criticism. But I did have to explain it to Father.“
„At first, I thought it was about two men loving the same woman!“ Arafinwë admitted, blushing at the mere thought. „I was worried that my son might be courting a married lady.“
„I should hope not,“ Amárië said primly.
Arafinwë tilted his head, giving her an amused glance. To her relief, he did not inquire about the status of her relationship to his son. Instead, he said, „I should be flattered that you think me capable of keeping those two in check. I am not so certain. Still, maybe I should adopt this as the badge of my house?“

They laughed together and turned towards other topics, although Amárië was reminded of it whenever she saw the gold and the emeralds gleaming on Findaráto's hand. It made her smile.


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What was Finrod thinking? Perhaps, if he truly wanted to court her, he thought she ought to know what kind of tangled mess she might be getting herself into if she accepted him? Poor girl!

I loved this part:

He had watched the proceedings and made the occasional respectful remark, while she had watched his lovely profile, the elegant manner in which his hand cupped his chin, the attentive way in which he leaned forward, the sparkle in his eyes as his focus shifted from one speaker to the next.

So much fun to read. She was a clever maid, but one who found herself there because she was simply attracted to this handsome, charming young man. (One might see Finrod in later years as a snake charmer himself. Since in M-e he seemed to be the one who tried to stay on good terms with all of kinsmen, despite their complicated differences and alliances or lack thereof.)

Well, he thinks that these council sessions are super exciting and didn't realise that others might find it less interesting. But as you say, letting her see how complicated his family is isn't the worst idea if he's serious about courting her. :D

She does figure it out neatly enough. (And that's a neat thought! Well, he does keep on wearing that ring until he gives it to Barahir!) Glad you enjoyed it!

Despite the mix of blood that Finrod has, I think that the Noldor predominates in him so he must find discussions about sewage repairs and mining committees fascinating. Does he realize that Amarie, and the Vanyar in general I suppose, must be bored to tears by these topics? Smart girl Amarie who picks the undercurrents right away!

she realised that comparing the commonwealth of the Noldor to a furry little burrower might be a little insulting.

Feanor and Fingolfin's behaviour make marmots seem statesmanlike and dignified!

Lovely story


I think he enjoys the sense of duty and political participation more than the actual content of the discussions, FWIW. ;) I don't think he realises that Amárie might not see it the same way. On the other hand, it does give Amárie plenty of opportunity to analyse the unspoken!

Hah! No self-respecting marmot ever swore an unbreakable oath, or challenged Morgoth to single combat, either! Perhaps she didn't want to insult the marmot?

Thank you!

I love this idea! Really very clever and a perfect use of canon!  You made me spend a long time on the web trying to find an artistic representation that resembled your description of the ring. Did you have an inspiration or have you drawn one? This one was the closet I could find.

http://ominously.deviantart.com/art/Ring-of-Barahir-149044694

Like the characterization and interaction of the three of them very much.

Ooh, thank you! Glad you liked my idea. Barahir's ring - or rather, the fact that it is supposed to be the emblem of the House of Finarfin - is rather enigmatic, considering that the heraldic designs Tolkien doodled tend to look... completely different from the snakes and flowers described in the Lay of Leithian. And I am extremely underwhelmed by the way it was executed in the LotR movies, I must admit.

As it happens, I do have a rather shoddy sketch that comes closer to what I imagine, although that doesn't really do it justice either. It's missing the coiled snake bodies too - I only thought of that detail later on, TBH! And obviously, I am less skilled as an artist than Fëanor is as a goldsmith! (Well duh.)

Anyway, I'm thrilled you like both the description of the ring and the characterisation of these folks. I don't often write Finarfinians (or Vanyar) so it was a fun new thing to try.