"The House of a Friend" & other drabbles by Himring
Fanwork Notes
Written for the Petrology Challenge at Tolkien Weekly on LiveJournal and also for SWG for Akallabeth in August
True drabbles (100 words according to MS Word)
Fanwork Information
Summary: The friendship of Narvi and Celebrimbor: Narvi and Celebrimbor work on the Doors of Moria and other scenes. Now added: Exploring Upwards (extra double drabble) Major Characters: Celebrimbor, Dwarves Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet Challenges: Akallabêth in August Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 8 | Word Count: 953 |
Posted on 10 August 2013 | Updated on 4 September 2022 |
This fanwork is complete. |
The House of a Friend
For Zdenka, in response to her drabble Let the Star Rise: http://b2mem.livejournal.com/240741.html
Prompt: Chalk
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After careful planning, Narvi takes a piece of chalk and begins to mark up the rock face, while Celebrimbor stands well back, checking the position of the marks against the sketch. Finally, Narvi moves to the lower centre of the design and positions his first stroke…
‘Narvi, wait!’ cries Celebrimbor.
‘Too far to the left?’ Narvi asks.
There is silence behind his back—and he realizes this is not about a flaw in execution.
‘It is the sign of your House; it belongs on the Doors,’ Narvi says.
And between moon-shaped tree branches, he chalks out the Star of Feanor.
Duchesses for the Roof
Prompt: Slate
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‘Shale, schist, slate!’ sings Narvi in his deep gravelly voice. ‘Shale, schist, slate! Shale for the roads of Elven Town, slate for its roofs!’
Meticulously, he positions his chisel and splits the foliated rock, again and again.
‘Slate for the roof: duchesses for the Gwaith-i-Mirdain, narrow ladies for Celebrimbor…’
He trims leaves of rock into flat, thin squares: larger ones, smaller ones…
‘Narvi, my friend,’ says Celebrimbor, ‘you have the strength of ten dwarves, but I see your apprentices failing on their feet. How about a brief rest and a glass of the red wine I just received from Edhellond?’
Shell-like, Translucent
Prompt: Marble
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For Galadriel, Celebrimbor insists on marble. Narvi presents samples and, unsurprised, watches his friend choose a delicately blue-veined, near-translucent white reminiscent of the Lady’s shell-like complexion. Another gift for the woman Celebrimbor fervently admires but simply cannot get along with! Never, not in a thousand years, even if she weren’t married already. Even a dwarf can see that but Narvi knows better than to say anything.
But after work, as he watches Celebrimbor crouching on the floor and playing marbles with the children of the Khazad, laughing uproariously at being beaten by Narvi’s great-niece, Narvi sighs, thinking: What a waste!
Chapter End Notes
From Gimli's rhapsody about Aglarond: "folded marbles, shell-like, translucent as the living hands of Queen Galadriel"
Shadow on the Wall
Prompt: Obsidian
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‘I saw the Father of Dragons, Glaurung—twice’, says Celebrimbor. ‘I saw Gothmog, the Lord of Balrogs. They carried the dark flame of Morgoth inside their hearts. When it was strongest in them, it was as hot as a volcano, as hot as fabled Mount Orodruin in the Southlands! Where they went, the rocks beneath them melted into a trail of black glass... They were terrible, Narvi.’
The hearth-fire flickers, throwing an abrupt shadow on the cave wall. Narvi shudders inwardly. Nightmares of the First Age!
‘There are no balrogs here,’ he murmurs, soothingly, ‘and no dragons. We have peace.’
Chapter End Notes
Alluding to the fact that obsidian consists of volcanic glass (with thanks to Huinare for a bit of geological background information)
Physic and Metaphysics
Prompt: Granite
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‘I would quite like to revert to rock,’ grumbles Narvi. ‘Granite doesn’t hurt as much as I do!’
‘What would Arda Unmarred be without Dwarves!’ protests Celebrimbor. ‘It would be Marred by that very lack!’
He is rubbing something elvish into Narvi’s back. He says he begged it off Celeborn! It even works on dwarvish swollen joints.
‘Elves claim Mahal was at fault in making us!’ remarks Narvi provocatively.
But Celebrimbor’s ageless face is sad.
‘It is an elvish fault-—not to want to say goodbye forever.’
Oh Mahal!
Narvi clears his throat.
‘Ah—we’ll have to wait and see.’
Chapter End Notes
Allegedly, Elves are supposed to believe that Dwarves have no role in Arda Unmarred and revert to the stone they were made of after death. Dwarves believe that their creator, Aule or Mahal, has set halls aside for them in Mandos.
Celebrimbor looks in Kheled-zaram
Bonus chapter--not a fixed-length ficlet.
What it says on the tin.
Gen, no warnings.
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'Look', said Narvi urgently. 'Do you see?'
Celebrimbor stooped further down over the still surface of the water and gazed intently.
He saw the mountain peaks appear--the gleaming white of Celebdil, the Silvertine, mirrored perfectly in deep blue--and in the space beyond, a crown of seven stars. Small and distant as they seemed, their brightness pierced his heart, almost as if a Silmaril had swum suddenly into his sight across the wide reaches of Ilmen.
He straightened, then bowed low before Narvi.
'I thank you, Narvi, for showing me this--but I doubt I can reproduce even a pale shadow of such beauty--even in ithildin...'
'You can't', said Narvi. 'But the lake will always be here--and now you know, at least, what the Crown of Durin truly looks like.'
Chapter End Notes
Written for Huinare's "Sorry, Celebrimbor" month on LiveJournal.
Also, I think I may have read a version of this scene before but, if so, I don't remember who it was by.

Extra drabble: The Heavenly Arch
Celebrimbor and Narvi, working on the Gates of Moria, take a break and study the western sky.
Gen. No warnings.
Read Extra drabble: The Heavenly Arch
"Do you know we do not all see rainbows the same way?" asked Celebrimbor. "We elves see seven colours in the rainbow, but many Men see only five. And I have been told that Dwarves see six, but one of them is beyond red and not visible to other peoples. So Telchar said, in days of old."
"Ha," said Narvi, determined not to be impressed by any talk of dwarven heroes of the First Age today. "Aren't you rather missing the point?"
"Which is?"
"It's there, and it's quite something", said Narvi, pointing skywards above the Sirannon.
"Magnificent!" Celebrimbor agreed.
Chapter End Notes
"The Heavenly Arch" is the name of a House of Gondolin. It may be intended to be ultimately the same word as "Ilweran", said to be the Quenya name of the rainbow, although this apparently means literally "bridge of heaven". The name of the house is said to refer to the rainbow, and the members of the house bore a boss on their shields made up of seven gems, probably in allusion to the seven colours of the rainbow, suggesting that the elves distinguish seven colours in it.
Wikipedia says that there is some indication that people tend to see as many colours in the rainbow as they distinguish basic colour terms in their language and that Newton saw five, then revised his account to seven.
(And it might be useful to dwarves to be able to see infrared. I think someone has suggested this in fan fiction before, but I don't remember who. Celebrimbor might have learned of it from Telchar at some point during Curufin's negotiations with him.)
Perhaps unsurprisingly, the prompt for this was "rainbow".
Extra double drabble: Exploring Upwards
During a more peaceful time in the Second Age, long before the dramatic chase of Gandalf after the fleeing Balrog and their duel above the clouds:
As well as showing Celebrimbor Mirrormere, Narvi also takes his friend up the legendary Endless Stair.
General Audiences (no warnings)
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And there was the time Celebrimbor and Narvi climbed the Endless Stair together. Although they did not start from the bottom, from the lowest dungeon, it was a long, long climb, requiring several rests. Up, up and up went Narvi, until even his tireless dwarven legs ached with thousands of steps, and up and up went Celebrimbor after him, until even his elven head threatened to spin with the spiralling of the stair.
At last, they reached the pinnacle of Zirakzigil and looked out through the window on that dizzy eyrie in the snow above the mists of the world.
‘So, what did you think of my tower?’ King Durin asked, when they were down again.
Celebrimbor said little in reply, so lost was he still in wonder of the sight.
He returned to Ost-in-Edhil and, shortly thereafter, crafted a tall pair of goblets, of milky glass, translucent and opaque and shot through with silver, intricately patterned and whorled. These he sent to Durin as a gift, by way of thanks that the King had permitted Narvi to take him up the Stair.
‘Look,’ said Celebrimbor. ‘Remember?’
Narvi, gazing upwards, saw an eagle wheeling about the peak.
‘Yes,’ he said.
Chapter End Notes
Written for the Spiralling challenge at Tolkien100.
2 x 100 words according to MS Word
(1) Comment by oshun for "The House of a Friend" &... [Ch 1]
Aww! I love this. I’ve always loved the fact that the star of Fëanor was on that door. It was a big influence on the way I have imagined a lot of elements in my personal canon for my stories. It cuts directly across the viewpoint of those who like to imagine that Celebrimbor spent his life hating that he was a descendant of Fëanor or ashamed of his heritage. It also is a big neon sign for other readers who who have little to no interest in the backstory to The Lord of the Rings
Re: (1) Comment by oshun for "The House of a Friend" &... [Ch 1]
Thank you very much, Oshun!
I'm ashamed to say that it needed Zdenka to point out to me how significant the choice of Celebrimbor to include the Star on the Doors of Moria is. And there is also that lovely cadence to Gandalf saying: "And the Star of the House of Feanor"--he doesn't comment otherwise just then, but it makes me think of that other passage where he speaks of his longing to use the Palantir to perceive Feanor at work...
(2) Comment by elfscribe for "The House of a Frien... [Ch 1]
I enjoyed being there at the moment of the making of the inscription on the Doors of Durin. You've suggested much about the relationship of elf and dwarf, in few words.
Re: (2) Comment by elfscribe for "The House of a Frien... [Ch 1]
Thank you, Elfscribe!
Most of Celebrimbor's relationships were rather fraught, one way or the other, but I like to think that in Narvi he had a true friend.
(3) Comment by Independence1776 for "The House of ... [Ch 1]
Ooh! I like this.
Re: (3) Comment by Independence1776 for "The House of ... [Ch 1]
Thank you and thank you for letting me know!
(4) Comment by Tarion Anarore for "The House of a ... [Ch 5]
These are lovely. I love the references to the momentuousness of etching the Star of Fëanor on the Doors of Moria, the obsidian and the "Elvish flaw".
Re: (4) Comment by Tarion Anarore for "The House of a ... [Ch 5]
Thank you very much! I'm glad those work for you!
(5) Comment by Meisiluosi for "The House of a Frie... [Ch 1]
You can say/evoke so much with so few words.
An ability I've always craved but never had...:-)
I love these...:-)
Re: (5) Comment by Meisiluosi for "The House of a Frie... [Ch 1]
Thank you very much! I'm happy you find them evocative.
The drabble sequence is quite a new form for me, really (although some of my pieces have always been fairly short).
(6) Comment by pandemonium_213 for "The House of a... [Ch 5]
Very nice set of drabbles, Himring! They hang together well, and in an economy of words, speak clearly to a strong friendship. This last was poignant.
Re: (6) Comment by pandemonium_213 for "The House of a... [Ch 5]
Thank you very much!
I'm glad that they work as a sequence--and especially that that last one works. The last one was the one I was most anxious about!
(7) Comment by Ellynn for "The House of a Friend" ... [Ch 6]
Oh, so nice!
Re: (7) Comment by Ellynn for "The House of a Friend" ... [Ch 6]
Thank you very much, Ellynn!
(8) Comment by Lyra for "The House of a Friend" & ... [Ch 7]
I love the idea that the Dwarves can see infrared! And I love Narvi's reaction to Celebrimbor's musings. Analysing and understanding things is all very well, but one shouldn't forget to simply admire their beauty...
Re: (8) Comment by Lyra for "The House of a Friend" & ... [Ch 7]
I'm glad you agree with Narvi here! You can still admire things together and be sharing their beauty, even if you're not seeing quite the same thing!
I tried to track down the infrared idea, afterwards. I thought I remembered encountering it in a specific fic. But all I found out there on the interwebz was a discussion by Dungeons and Dragons gamers who speculated that D & D dwarves had got their special vision ultimately from Tolkien, somehow...
(9) Comment by Lyra for "The House of a Friend" & ... [Ch 5]
Aww. This is both heartwarming and heartbreaking. I love the intense friendship of these two that shines through - even when they argue!
Re: (9) Comment by Lyra for "The House of a Friend" & ... [Ch 5]
Thank you very much, Lyra!
I so much wanted the intense friendship to shine through! (And I don't think it would be as strong if they didn't sometimes argue!)
(10) Comment by StarSpray for "The House of a Frie... [Ch 7]
This is a lovely drabble series, but I especially like this one--the idea that Elves, Dwarves, and Men all have different spectrums of color that they can see is really neat.
Re: (10) Comment by StarSpray for "The House of a Frie... [Ch 7]
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like the idea!
(11) Comment by Lordnelson100 for "The House of a ... [Ch 7]
All this delicate detail in this series is wonderful. There is the happiness of knowing that there joint work lasts for a long long time, and inspires others, and the terrible sadness that is at the edge of all Celebrimbor stories.
Re: (11) Comment by Lordnelson100 for "The House of a ... [Ch 7]
I'm glad you enjoyed the detail! Thank you!
Yes, their work will endure to be found and admired by Gandalf and the Fellowship, as a lasting memorial to friendship.
But of course there is also the loss of Eregion and Khazad-dum and the horror of Celebrimbor's fate, to offset all that.