The Sweet Bard by Cirth
Fanwork Notes
Fanwork Information
Summary: A stranger's first impression of Maglor. Major Characters: Maglor, Original Character(s) Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 159 |
Posted on 6 July 2014 | Updated on 6 July 2014 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Chapter 1
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This story was kindly nominated for the 2014 Tree and Flower Awards by Himring.
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The Sweet Bard
You tell him he's a miracle;
That he is beautiful because he is kind, soft
Like the down of a hart's proud neck;
But nothing is as lovely as his voice,
So supple, so elusive;
His face is turned away; he sulks
like a loveable, sullen child;
You pluck a wild rose from a bush
and prick your finger; blood wells;
You kneel before him, offer this gift
and say, "Sweet bard and
forgotten king,
I grow idle behind the damp, cold walls of this Mithrim fort;
Sing me
just one song. Tell me
of the burning ships and
the way your noble brother
stood aside,
and of his rescue by your valiant cousin."
He looks at you
With eyes dark as twilight shadows;
He takes the rose; you smile.
He crushes the flower in his snow-white fist, and now
Warm red streaks run over his fingers, and he says,
"My enemies
hear the song of my blade;
I have
nothing else to give."
Chapter End Notes
A/n: This was inspired by Ugly Duchess' beautiful poem, 'Tell Me of Helcaraxë'.
(1) Comment by oshun for The Sweet Bard [Ch 1]
Oh, lovely!
Re: (1) Comment by oshun for The Sweet Bard [Ch 1]
Thanks so much! :)
(2) Comment by Himring for The Sweet Bard [Ch 1]
Effective!
Re: (2) Comment by Himring for The Sweet Bard [Ch 1]
Thank you, Himring. :)
(4) Comment by Winterwitch for The Sweet Bard [Ch 1]
This is very beautiful and evocative.
"hear the song of my blade" - well said!
Re: (4) Comment by Winterwitch for The Sweet Bard [Ch 1]
Thank you so much, Winterwitch. :)