I enjoyed this! Nice handling of the challenges and expectations that each of these two young princes of the Noldor carry.

A very enjoyable story! Very nice characterizations.

Petty-Maitimo: I sympathize with him with all preasures of family and being the elder!

There's a lot in this chapter!

Many telling details about the characters--but I'm perhaps particularly struck by Finrod breaking the finger of the statue.

Things are going quickly--Finrod and Maglor have only recently met and already they are heading off into the wilds together. It's a bad moment for Maglor, so he's lucky to have Finrod's support.

This startled me a little (I think because I tend to associate your writing with longer chapters), but I really liked that scene.