The Bait by semper_eadem

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Fanwork Notes

One of my really first attempts to write an un-Feanor-like Curufin. Obstinate elf that he is, it did not quite come out the way I had imagined him in my head. The young Galadriel, however, was surprisingly easily to write. I do enjoy her more than her mature and grave counterpart from Lord of the Rings.

 

Beta-read version updated!

As I'm quite unsure of my work and my command of the English language, I asked the lovely Dawn to take a look at this story. That had been many moons ago and Dawn probably believes I have fallen off the edge of the world. (Rather held hostage in the real world... Well...)

Thank you again for your beta-reading and the many tips you gave me!

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Sitting together for tea, Curufinwë reveals that he actually cares and Artanis realises that she does not know.

 

A story of the Time of the Trees.

Major Characters: Curufin, Galadriel

Major Relationships:

Genre: General

Challenges:

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 3, 895
Posted on 26 August 2013 Updated on 26 August 2013

This fanwork is complete.


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Thank you for your review!

Yes, there really should someone betaread, and I apologise if my blunders make the story harder to read. English is not my native language and though I re-read my writings until I can not stand my own texts anymore, some mistakes always go unnoticed.

Do you have a suggestion, where I could find a beta-reader?