Vodka by ford_of_bruinen
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Summary: Maglor's and Maedhros' first conversation after maedhros has been saved from Thangorodrim. Major Characters: Maedhros, Maglor Major Relationships: Genre: General Challenges: Rating: Teens Warnings: Expletive Language, Mature Themes |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 552 |
Posted on 30 October 2007 | Updated on 30 October 2007 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Vodka
A big thank you to Enismirdal for the beta.
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Maedhros paused in the doorway, gathering his strength. The small room that his brother used as an office seemed at odds with itself, the brightly coloured rugs and wall-hangings contrasting garishly against the wooden walls and floor of the bleak room. His suspicions about what he would found proved accurate as his gaze fell on his brother: the cold sobriety of the day had been deserted. Maglor's hair fell carelessly across the table over which he leant, cradling a crude glass in his hands.
A sardonic smile played over Maglor's face as he looked up. “Welcome back, brother,” he said, raising the glass towards Maedhros. “How was Morgoth's care?”
Maedhros entered, carefully sinking down in an empty chair. “Inhospitable.”
Maglor nodded, his eyes returning to the glass in his hands. “So I imagine.”
“A late celebration of my return, Káno? Or did you find another reason?” Maedhros nodded at the half-empty bottle on his brother's right.
Smiling grimly, Maglor looked up, meeting Maedhros' eyes. “What better reason than to celebrate the return of a long lost brother.” He emptied the glass in one mouthful before refilling it to the brim. “A brother I left to rot in hell, I may add.”
Maedhros snorted as he reached out, taking the glass from Maglor's hand. “Guilt does not become you. If it helps, I would have done the same had it been you.”
Maglor leant back, balancing the chair on its back legs as he looked at his older brother, emancipated, bruised and broken even now. “No,” he said carelessly. “You would not. You, of all of us, still have that thin thread of honour. The rest of us shook that off at Losgar.”
“And so you consider yourself honourless now?” Maedhros’ voice was dry; he had long years of experience in dealing with his brother in this state.
“Close enough.” Maglor sounded unconcerned. “You know the boy only saved you because he fancies himself in love?”
“Be that as it may my desires never ran towards boys.”
Laughing, Maglor let the chair drop back on four legs. “Perhaps I should bed him instead. He has a pretty face.”
“From what I recall your tastes never ran to our own any more than mine did.”
Maglor shrugged. “You take what you can get in this life, male or female. They are equally able to spread their legs or open their mouths.”
“An very romantic view of love, brother.” Maedhros raised the glass, sipping at the clear liquid. The strong burn of raw alcohol tickled his throat, sending him into a fit of coughs and splutters. “Morgoth's hells, brother, I swear you find a fouler liquid every time. What is this rot?”
“Something the local tribes makes from potatoes, I am led to believe. It does the job.”
Shaking his head, Maedhros pushed the glass back at his brother. “You can keep it.” He nodded at the thick mound of parchments resting to Maglor's left. What are you working on now?”
Maglor looked down at the notes, tapping his fingers over the sheets. “A pretence of regret.” He emptied the glass and met his brother's eyes, deliberately picking up the bottle with his right hand. “Another of these and their voices will come to me.” He saluted his brother with the bottle before taking a deep swig. “I call it the Noldolantë.”
(1) Comment by Rhapsody for Vodka
Cheers Maglor! It seems that the years of waiting, debating the possible treason of Morgoth turned Maglor - very reasonably so - very cynical. No better way to vent this by writing his master piece, the Noldolantë.
Re: (1) Comment by Rhapsody for Vodka
Thanks for the feedback :) I must agree I tend to view Maglor as always having been a bit cynical, watching and analysing how people works to understand them when he later writes songs and stuff. he is, in the back of my mind, the most cyical of the lot...possibly with maedhros having the most 'honourable' and 'romantic' view of people...
(2) Comment by Angelica for Vodka
I enjoyed your 'politically incorrect' Maglor very much: condescending towards Fingon ("the boy"), like a colonial master about the Sindar ("the local tribes"), exploitative about sex, excessively fond of hard drinks, manipulative and cynical about his works ("a pretence of regret") and deliberately unpleasant to Maedhros about the right hand. Yet behind all this he's overwhelmed with guilt at what he did and at what he didn't do (rescue Maedhros) and trying to work it out. When you mention the Noldolantë everything falls into place.
Re: (2) Comment by Angelica for Vodka
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed him! :) I have to admit I loved writing him, he appeals to my cynical side of things and I would not be suprised if he pops up agian sometime. And lets be honest writing someone that politically incorrect is just pure fun, he can say anything!
Thank you very much for the fb!
(3) Comment by Robinka for Vodka
I should've known that alcohol + the Noldor = a very explosive result ;)
Jokes aside, I loved it. It's classy, well-written and very Feanorian'ish (does such a word exist anyway?). You've nailed them here. Kudos, and thank you.
Best wishes,
Binka
Re: (3) Comment by Robinka for Vodka
Thank you Binka! I am glad you enjoyed it :)
I had been discussing the Feanorians with keiliss the whole day and the idea of Maglor and vodka was born... after that I just had to write it :)
I also admit that much as I love the feanorians (and I do) I ted to view them as rather unpleasant when they want to be (like maglor does at this time)
Thanks for the lovely fb
*hugs*
Uli
(4) Comment by Klose for Vodka
It's a refreshing twist to see Maglor as the bitter, cynical one post-Thangorodrim. This was a most insightful look at these two - I love your style, it flows so easily. The dialogue is wonderful, as well - "A pretence of regret" - phwoar!
Maglor shrugged. “You take what you can get in this life, male or female. They are equally able to spread their legs or open their mouths.”
Woof, Mags! He's certainly a jaded one. The nuances that run throughout this short piece makes it so evocative, telling so much with so few words.
This is really well done - loved Maglor's last line. Great work!
(5) Comment by Feta for Vodka
Fabulous dialogue. It was nice to see Maglor as the cynical one, for once, and I liked that he was regretful without being too mopey - too often it seems that he's crying and passing out hugs. Yours was far more interesting.
(6) Comment by whitewave for Vodka
This is a different but plausible view of Maglor. Most people who had to deal with what they did during those early years, especially with Maedhros' captivity, would believably turn that way more or less. And the rather edgy "bonding" moment is so Feanorian! They could be like that if and when they want to, I imagine.
(7) Comment by Michiru for Vodka
I love tales of not wimpy!Maglor. It's a very interesting story, besides that; I don't think I ever came across a story where the Fingon-Maedhros dynamic was portrayed as only one-sided. It's interesting. Anyway, lovely dialogue and characterization.