The Well by Independence1776

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Fanwork Notes

All belongs to Tolkien and the Tolkien Estate.

Thanks to Jen for looking this over, and especially to my betas Dawn Felagund and LadyLunas.

ETA: I know that many people enjoy this story because of its more spiritual nature, and I hope you continue to do so. But the fic has a bit of an odd history, spirituality-wise. It was literally the last gasp of my Catholic faith; after I wrote it, I no longer had problems calling myself a non-Christian.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Post Fourth Age. Maglor meets someone unexpected. Nominated in the 2009 MEFAs.

Major Characters: Maglor

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: General

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Rating: General

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Chapters: 1 Word Count: 601
Posted on 25 February 2009 Updated on 25 February 2009

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The Well

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The Well

Maglor sat in the scant shade provided by the well behind him. He had filled his waterskins, returning them and the rope he had used to lower them into the water to his worn and travel-stained pack, and now rested, back against the cool stones, waiting until the sun sank lower in the sky before continuing. Even for him, traveling in this hot and dry land in the middle of the day was hard and he preferred not to do it when possible.

The Noldo heard footsteps crunching in the dirt on the nearby road, drawing him out of his thoughts, and sighed, hoping the lone traveler would pass by as several others had, heading to a village up the road that he had chosen to avoid. Instead, the soft footsteps drew closer and stopped next to the Elf. Maglor didn’t look up, but simply said in the local language some called Aramaic, “The well is tainted.”

“But the cover is off. Did you take any?”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

Maglor closed his eyes briefly, wishing he would have lied. How could he explain that he wouldn’t become sick if he drank tainted water to slake his thirst? “I… I did not know.”

With a gentle laugh, the man crouched next to the Elf and said, “You knew. But it does not matter, for the inability to become ill is the way I made you.”

Maglor stiffened. The way--? He finally looked at the man, meeting his eyes. Yes, he was human. But his eyes… They belonged to no Elf or Man, no Vala or Maia. Only One could have eyes burning with the soft light of the Flame Imperishable.

Maglor whispered, “Ilúvatar.”

The Kinslayer scrambled to his feet, fear and shame overwhelming him. He bowed and then, dodging around the stone well and leaving his pack, ran.

“Stop.”

Unable to ignore the quiet command, Maglor slipped on a patch of gravel and landed sprawled in the dirt. Eru-as-Man slowly walked to and then stopped in front of him. Refusing to look up, the Elf stared at His sandals. A hand appeared in front of his face. Ilúvatar waited patiently, saying nothing. Maglor finally shifted, and, taking the hand, rose to his feet. Still, he didn’t meet His eyes. Instead, he stared at his right hand in awe and fear, as the pain and scars disappeared.

“My Lord…”

“Look at me, my child.”

For the second time, Maglor looked into the eyes of his creator. Instead of the condemnation he deserved, he saw love and forgiveness. To his surprise, he collapsed back into the dirt, weeping. Ilúvatar knelt next to the Elf and, ignoring the dust that covered the latter, pulled him into His arms, rocking slowly back and forth. When Maglor finished crying, he sat up and, this time, was able to calmly meet His eyes. Eru smiled and kissed his forehead.

“Go home, my child. Your exile has ended. All has been forgiven.”

He kissed the Elf on the top of his head once more, helped the still-stunned Maglor to his feet, and walked back to the well. He touched the stone forming it, looking at the water pooling out of arm’s reach, and returned to the road. He didn’t look back at the Elf still standing there, but a gentle thought floated into Maglor’s mind.

Go home. A boat is waiting.

But Maglor didn’t move until Ilúvatar passed beyond his sight in the rocky hills. Only then did he retrieve his pack and head to the shore.


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I very much liked this!

I'll note especially that I love your choice of words and style, it fits the piece perfectly! The reference to the Flame Imperishable was excellent.

It always makes my inner fangrrl smile to see Maglor get a happy ending. Thank you for posting :D

Thank you so much! I\'m so glad the style worked. The strange thing is that, like Tolkien\'s \"Leaf by Niggle,\" it came to me all at once and there was very little I changed.\r\n\r\nOh, good. I was a little worried about the Flame Imperishable sentence being a little cliched.\r\n\r\nI firmly believe that he deserves a happy ending. All of the Feanorians suffered too much, and he was the only one who wanted to renounce the Oath.

I had to sit down and read it again, drinking in the meaning of Eru's words and Maglor's reaction to it. What I so like about this piece is that in a way you leave Maglor's pride and intent of why he still lingers intact, it doesn't feel forced, he still feels very willful and proud. He just adapts to new worlds - Aramaic *squee*, however he still tries to seek out new boundaries. What if he comes across a well that is thusly poisoned that he might die? Just great food for thought and I love to see that in a story.

It feels right to me, personally, that Eru himselfs shows that he is forgiven, again not forced and too dramatic, just perfect. This story is a gem, gently written with a beautiful pacing and you take your time with revealing your intent in it. *thumbs up*

 

In the interest of full disclosure, I am not one of the faithful.  But that does not preclude my appreciation of a lovely story of redemption and forgiveness.  This is poignant and clearly written with care.  So much of The Silmarillion is unrelentingly sad and drenched with regret.  In spite of my cynical nature, I still like to see those sparks of hope.  Thank you for giving hope and then some to Maglor at the side of that well in the desert.

Thank you so much! I think that if we didn\'t have hope, we wouldn\'t get much done.\r\n\r\nAs for your not being Christian, that doesn\'t matter to me. I\'m not one myself, even though I was raised Catholic, though I do believe in a somewhat deistic God (whom I actually prefer to call Eru). The reason it\'s set in that particular circumstance is that Middle-earth was created as mythology set in our world, it\'s stated in Athrabeth that there are Edain who believe \"that the One will enter Arda,\" and that Tolkien\'s Christian beliefs underlie his work. This is probably the most explicitly religious fanfic I\'ll ever write, but the story popped into my head fully formed, and I couldn\'t ignore it.