Guileless Son by Kaylee Arafinwiel
Fanwork Notes
In mine and AfricanDaisy’s ‘verse, Carphadril is a queen of the Evair (Avari) who settled in far northern Greenwood. Two of her daughters married ellyn who became high nobles of Doriath, forsaking her to continue the Great Journey westward, and she desires the fall of all Doriathrin nobility due to their treachery.
In our main ficverse, though, she doesn't start quite this early to take out her revenge on the Iathrim. But the plotbunny I was given bit, and so...
It is prophesied that only treachery from within will cause Doriath to fall. (“Sketch of the Mythology”)
Also, it is National Poetry Month and I am including the B2MEM 2023 prompt "Haiku".
Fanwork Information
Summary: Carphadril, Queen of the Evair, moves against the King and Queen of Doriath, a threat to her rule. She raises a son who - she hopes - will wed Luthien and claim the throne of the other great forest realm for her.
Major Characters: Daeron Major Relationships: Genre: Alternate Universe Challenges: Rejects Rating: Teens Warnings: Check Notes for Warnings |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 493 |
Posted on 16 April 2023 | Updated on 16 April 2023 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Guileless Son
“Guileless son, I’ll shape your belief, and you’ll always know that your father’s a thief/You won’t understand the cause of your grief but you’ll always follow the voices beneath that sing/Loyalty, loyalty, loyalty, loyalty only to me…” - Heather Dale, “Mordred’s Lullaby”
Read Guileless Son
Carphadril smiled thinly, pacing around the pallet where Dairon lay, shivering under his worn blanket. The Queen of Gorthebar, in the north of the wood which would someday be called Greenwood the Great, had no use for boy-children - usually.
“Sleep now and dream,” she murmured, almost gently, eyes glinting. “Tomorrow, my son, your training shall begin.”
“Goodnight, my lady,” Dairon whispered.
“‘Mother’ will do,” she said, a hand ghosting over his pale brow, slick with sweat. “But remember your place, my little prince.”
“Yes…mother.” Dairon curled up on the pallet, going still as Carphadril tucked the blanket around his shoulders. Her kiss on his brow froze him, white with fear.
Still, he tried to look as though he was asleep. Why would the Queen of Gorthebar be showing him this special favor?
Just so she could take it away, surely. He cringed, feeling as though a bolt of lightning would strike him for daring to think such traitorous thoughts, but nothing happened.
At last, he fell asleep.
The next day, Dairon was called before Carphadril’s daughters, her staunchest supporters, who began his training in the art of slow poison. “Tell me, my son. How do you kill a Maia?” Carphadril asked Dairon, looking down at the slender youth.
Dairon’s lower lip worked between his teeth, and he gnawed anxiously, yelping as one of the princesses dealt him a sharp cuff.
“You…can’t? They’re immortal?” he hazarded.
“Unless you find a way to make them mortal,” Carphadril mused. “Shall we see about that?”
A frisson of fear plucked Dairon like a harp string. “It will be as you say, my l--mother.”
“Good boy.”
They worked on the blood poison for a long time. In Dairon’s spare time, when he had any, he was permitted to write his songs and poetry, and play his flute. It surprised him that the Queen would allow him any such indulgence, but when he was told of the dark power Songs could wield, he understood.
He showed Carphadril one of his simple compositions.
The blood, it flows red
From many deep gashes where
Our warriors have struck
She praised his effort, encouraging him to study the topic of blood further.
At last, when Dairon had grown old enough, Carphadril deemed him ready. “Remember what I have taught you,” she cautioned him.
“I will present myself at the king’s court as a minstrel,” he recited. “I will win the princess’ heart with my music, and ensure she bears you a powerful heir. And I will kill the usurper queen and king, so that they may not try to overcome your power.”
“My power shall not be overcome,” Carphadril corrected sharply. “But they say the fall of Doriath will come from within. I shall punish the usurpers for stealing my daughters away, and take my rightful place.”
“Of course, mother,” Dairon bowed. “I live to serve. I am yours.”
“Yes, you are.”
Chapter End Notes
In this AU, Dairon (Daeron) is the son of Queen Carphadril's consort with a female thrall, which is common practice in Gorthebar. She generally accepts his daughters as servants and forces sons to be disposed of for her blood magics, lest they become a threat. But a vision of how her traitorous eldest trueborn daughters - one the wife of Elu Thingol's brother and Steward- might be brought low causes her to keep her youngest stepson alive, for now.
Similarities to certain Disney villains, as well as Morgan le Fay in Arthurian mythology, are not accidental.
What an intriguing AU! I…
What an intriguing AU! I like this creative use of the prompt and of Dairon's character, which seems in a way to fall between and twist BoLT where he's Lúthien's brother and later canon.
Thank you! I'm so glad you…
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That was what I was going for, a sort of twist on the Luthien's brother/later canon combination, so I'm glad it worked!
Oooh how compellingly creepy…
Oooh how compellingly creepy! And I love the song you used. Poor Dairon! But I love how you wove it into the story of Luthien and Doriath's fall!
Thank you so much!! Yes,…
Thank you so much!! Yes, very poor Dairon. I don't know if I'll ever add more to this AU, but the song is one of my favorites (I love Heather Dale's music in general, and she's a fantastic person besides being an amazing singer!!) I do kind of want to know what'll happen when Dairon tries to carry out the plan, but I have no idea right now lol.
oh my, poor Dairon I can…
oh my, poor Dairon I can feel his fear, poor boy, he dosn't really know what to do to keep the Queen happy. I want to give him a hug!
Beautifully written <3<3
yes exactly, he has no idea!…
yes exactly, he has no idea! thank you so much my dear star fish fren <3 Dairon needs all the hugs
(the thing about being raised by a parent like Carphadril is there really is no rhyme or reason to what will keep them happy that day, either, so Dairon really can't win *is sad for him*)
Oh this is truly chilling!…
Oh this is truly chilling! Poor Daeron, what a horrid stepmother! And I feel for the people of Gorthebar, it almost sounds as if the place was better when it became known as Mirkwood! I think Daeron is fortunate to escape her and enjoy the comparative freedom of Doriath...
Thanks Anerea! Yes,…
Thanks Anerea! Yes, Carphadril is a terrible stepmother (but being a dark sorceress, it kind of comes with the territory, I think).
I don't know if Carphadril was worse than Sauron, because at least the majority of her power was localized to above the Enchanted River (she enchanted it, I haven't yet figured out how or why) but occasionally she'd send out a specific messenger or two to complete a specific mission elsewhere, if her power felt threatened by some outside source. She wouldn't go herself and do the thing.
It's more likely that Carphadril is an unwitting tool of Morgoth (or Sauron, I suppose) than being a threat to their power. I imagine she was corrupted by them or one of the other Maiar in Morgoth's following, whether directly or indirectly.