Guilt-Stricken, Sobbing by Elwin Fortuna

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Turin, just after killing Beleg, sinks into despair.

Major Characters: Túrin

Major Relationships: Beleg/Túrin

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Drama, Ficlet

Challenges:

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Character Death

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 422
Posted on 18 June 2023 Updated on 18 June 2023

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And you captured it really well.

I hated that moment in the book where Turin realized he killed his best friend. It is a marvel Turin still lives through that. Great description of this horrid moment. Great job.