Strange Magic by oshun

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Fanwork Information

Summary:

Daeron questions Lúthien’s use of magic and simultaneously feels attracted to her for the first time.

Major Characters: Daeron, Lúthien Tinúviel

Major Relationships:

Genre: General, Romance

Challenges: 30-Day Character Study

Rating: General

Warnings:

This fanwork belongs to the series

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 615
Posted on 13 February 2018 Updated on 13 February 2018

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(Daeron and Lúthien)

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You're sailing softly through the sun.
In a broken stone-age dawn,
You fly so high
.  —lyrics “Strange Magic” by Electric Light Orchestra.

Daeron exited the conference chamber where he had been trapped for hours with the king and all of his dullest counselors. Sitting on the bench outside of the door Lúthien awaited her pretty face a perfect picture of bored petulance. The child, spoiled and cosseted by all, would grow to be a perfect horror if someone did not begin to occasionally say “no” to her. He hated the thought that it might have to him. No one else seemed likely to try.

“You took forever!” she whispered, grabbing his hand. “I need you to come play music for me.”

“I’m exhausted and hungry, you evil little brat.”

“I have food, you insufferable old grouch!” She pointed at the basket at her feet. He caught the scent of freshly baked meat pies and saw grapes, small red apples, and a quarter of a wheel of cheese. “There is a bottle of wine under all of that as well.” She grinned and wrinkled her nose at him.

“Well . . .” he drawled. His idea of refusing her this time died an easy death. It was not worth the struggle. The head cook’s meat pies were incomparable and he was starving.

They stopped by his room to pick up his smallest dulcimer and headed in the direction of the forest.

“If you are going where I think you are,” he said, “it’s going to be too wet for dancing. It rained last night and early this morning.”

“It’s beautiful now! Don’t be an old grumpy stick-in-mud. If you are a little nicer, I might condescend to sing for you!”

He didn’t know if he should be outraged or pleased. She had a lovely voice but wasn’t nearly as good as he was, probably never would be, although one could never be sure of that with her! Then he glanced to the side and caught her teasing smirk.

The forest glade where she had led them—her favorite spot—felt soggy underfoot. The fallen log where he usually sat and played for her would be wet, as his bottom would be also in no time at all.

“I know what you are thinking. I will fix it.”

“You ought not to mess with nature for your own selfish pleasure, brat.” He could not resist a smile and a chuckle. She was charming and her magic impressive.

“Ha! As though my nana doesn’t ever!” She had a point. Not every cloud sent scurrying away to rain on someone else’s picnic was directed by Melian for entirely altruistic purposes. “Now go sit down, master bard. Your place is dry already.”

“You are a perfectly wicked child," he said.  “Your nana ought to teach you that every bit of sorcery used has its price.”

“What is the price of a tiny patch of dry grass to dance upon?”

He had no answer for that.

“And anyway I am not a child anymore. If you ever looked at me, you’d see that.”

She stuck her lower lip out at him in an inappropriate show of flirtatiousness. There were a number of other things that her mother might be a bit tardy as discussing with her—the birds and bees, as some called it, or how not all males would be as immune to her nascent charms as he was. Or as he had been, he corrected himself, when she struck a pose with her arms forming a charming arch over her head, the diaphanous fabric of her dress hugging her torso to reveal some distinct breasts where only recently there had been barely noticeable nubbins.


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Very sweet and lighthearted.

I loved the banter between them. They reminded me of a married couple, used to each others mannerisms and such, but the love still present, if not just below the surface.

And Luthien with poor Daeron wrapped about her little finger. Jumping to her every whim, no matter his reluctance to do so. Mind you, how do you say no to the Princess of Doriath and an obvious beauty.

It was refreshing to read something without angst for a change. Sometimes it can get a bit much.

 

Thank you for sharing.

 

I think that Daeron for all his gifts and greater age was outclassed by Luthien's self-assurance and determination. She would have loved him I think, but unable to fall in love with him because she needed more of challenge and a mystery to engage her.

I am not one to write unrelieved anguish. Without the contrast of lighter moments it just turns into dreary and gray for me. Imagine LotR with no humor, song, or joy! Or The Silmarillion with no light and only Morgoth in ascendance without any resistance.

Thank you so very much for reading and sharing your impressions!

I'm charmed by the alliterative descriptions xD

Perfect picture of bored petulance... Hehehe. I've not really considered child/teen luthien, but I am convinced this is accurate - I particularly liked the point about how difficult it is to teach her 'no means no', and the idea that Melian would forget such talks altogether was a nice little thing that made me giggle.

 

Thanks for reading! And thanks so much for comment. (I guess I am imagining her to be the equivalent of a later teen, but Daeron thinks of her as a child because she grew up in front of his eyes and it is hard to adjust one's impressions.) I also think that all of the power of the more adult Luthien was acquired much earlier when it might have been a stretch for her to appreciate it. Nothing in her story convinces me that Luthien did not always strive to get what she wanted. She must have been a handful for Melian, who had have had her own struggles with raising a child into a functioning adult since being human was not her natural state.

Also the fact that there had been no half-maia-elf child before would mean both Melian and Thingol were flying blind; if adult luthien singing had such terrifying consequences when she wished, I shudder to imagine her 'terrible twos' or even just infant crying... And darn, now I feel somewhat sympathetic with Thingol locking her up all 'well, this has all the hallmarks of her other rebellious phases... It'll pass' xD