A Length Of Ribbon by Himring

Fanwork Information

Summary:

The fate of a bit of blue-and-silver ribbon before and after the Nirnaeth Arnoediad.

Major Characters: Fingon, Maedhros, Orcs

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: General, Romance, Slash/Femslash

Challenges:

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Expletive Language, Mature Themes, Sexual Content (Mild), Violence (Mild)

This fanwork belongs to the series

Chapters: 2 Word Count: 3, 694
Posted on 27 November 2011 Updated on 27 November 2011

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Chapter 1

Before the Nirnaeth Arnoediad.

Fingon/Maedhros.

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The stiff brocade of the robe is woven with Feanorian flames arrayed on a dark background: rows and rows of tiny flames, sparkling in red and gold and blue, so vivid and lifelike that they seem to leap and play as his limbs move underneath and the fabric shifts and catches the light from a different angle. Surely you could burn your fingertips brushing them along the hem of his sleeve! Further down, the small darting tongues of fire seem veiled in distance as if they burned far off in the depths of a nocturnal forest.

It was a long time in the making, that intricately woven robe. It was made for its wearer in Thargelion two decades before the Dagor Bragollach, by a distant cousin of Miriel Serinde’s who died when that settlement burned with the rest. No one in the Marches has the skill and leisure for such a task now. Fortunately, the more formal and ornate the robe, the less likely it is to go out of fashion.

The fabric is heavy. It imposes its own stately movement on its wearer. Maedhros slips out of the costly over-robe as a warrior shrugs out of his armour after battle is done, as an actor sheds his costume after the performance is over; what is revealed underneath is his customary plain dark grey.  Aphadon, his squire, carefully lifts the irreplaceable garment away, folds it neatly and stores it safely in the travelling-chest.

He returns to help Maedhros remove the pair of jewelled hair combs. Set with dozens of pearls and emeralds the size of thumb nails, they are the gift of the King of Belegost, Azaghal, and cannot be sold for provisions or arms without giving grave offense to an ally and friend. Therefore, they are still in Maedhros’s possession and available on the occasions when, without the castle of Himring as his backdrop, he feels the need to impress outsiders. 

Maedhros’s squire puts the combs away in their box on the dressing-table and helps Maedhros loosen his hair and brush it straight back across his shoulders, receiving the usual thanks for a familiar task. They bid each other good night and Maedhros listens as his Aphadon’s footsteps echo down the corridor leading to his quarters.

He has spent all day dazzling the Lords of Hithlum. It is, in a sense, a futile task, one that should not be required, for Fingon has decided that they will counter-attack and it is after all Fingon who is the King of Hithlum and the High King to boot. But everyone is calling the plan the Union of Maedhros—he wishes they would not, he should have come up with a catchier name for it pre-emptively, but that was a trick he missed—and now it is inextricably tied to his name. And that means that the attitude of people in Beleriand to the plan is far too much tied up with their attitude towards his person.

It is not enough that the Lords of Hithlum should follow Fingon loyally without protest—which they certainly will. If the plan is to succeed, they must have faith in it, and so they must have faith in Maedhros.  Even if Maedhros had only to convince them of his reliability as an ally, he would have his work cut out for him. So much ground that he gained in his long and patient efforts during the centuries before the Dagor Bragollach has been lost; the lords of Hithlum are remembering Losgar and the Doom more clearly than they do successful collaboration and the Dagor Aglareb.

They are not, of course, saying so. In fact, the day has been spent in relentlessly polite conversation and all the questions that were of real concern remained unasked. It was only their eyes that spoke.

Where were you when we were attacked and our lord Fingolfin fell?

I was stuck in a castle amid a sea of orcs and unable to lift a finger to help you. That is the true answer and they know it. It is not helpful at the moment.

Promise us that our women and children will be safe!

They know he cannot.

Will you turn your back on us in our greatest need as your brothers did on Finrod in Nargothrond?

He is staking the Marches on their success every bit as much as Fingon is staking Hithlum but when all is said and done, he is still a Feanorion.

All day, he smiled at them.  All day, he talked about anything and everything and did his very best to appear trustworthy, confident and competent.  His exploits during the defence of Himring have given him the reputation of a hero, an aura of success, and he has been using it to the hilt.

He does not think he has actually uttered an untruth to any of them, but the ones that secretly terrify him are not the ones that obstinately went on doubting him. They are the ones who implicitly seemed to believe everything he said, without reservations. Of course, they may simply be so loyal to their king that they give their trust to anyone that Fingon has decided to trust.

But the true facts of the situation are that the lords of Hithlum had already made their decision, Maedhros thinks.  As in the Marches, those who were not resolved to stay and fight, even against the odds,  either fled in the confusion immediately after Morgoth’s attacks or unobtrusively moved southwards soon after.  What he has been doing, in a way, is simply to try and make them feel good about their decision to remain, to persuade them that the timing is right for the battle they are already committed to. Only, of course, not everyone is a free agent; there are always dependents.

He closes his eyes and tries hard to think himself back into his own moment of high hope: the moment when he heard that the Dark Foe, the Great Deceiver, the one at the heart of his blackest nightmares, had been thoroughly bamboozled by a woman dressed up as a bat. It was utterly incredible; he was so astounded that he threw back his head and laughed right out and, as he laughed, he seemed to have a sense of darkness shifting, possibilities opening up…

***

The footsteps of his squire have long died away. He will not be returning tonight. Maedhros carefully eases the bolt on the door shut.

The apartment that he is quartered in is part of the royal suite. This flight of rooms used to be reserved for Turgon before his departure for Gondolin. When the castle of Barad Eithel was first constructed, the rooms of each of the royal family were connected to a private escape tunnel in case of emergencies. There is a concealed door next to the fireplace. Maedhros knows its location; Fingon has shown him how to open the catch.

He presses here, there, twists this and that, and gives the wall a small shove. The door slides open a bit. Maedhros kneels on the floor. He wads up a small piece of parchment and slips it into the crack, wedging the door open so that the room can be freely entered from the dark narrow passage on the other side. Then he sits back on his heels and quietly considers himself for a moment: Maedhros waiting for Fingon, Maitimo daring to expect Findekano. The strangeness, the temerity of such an expectation!

It is not that he has not been given plenty of reason to expect Fingon.  In fact, Fingon practically commanded him to leave the door open for him. Arguably, he is demonstrating Feanorian loyalty to the High King by acceding to his wishes. He briefly imagines trying to use that argument to defend his actions before the late High King Fingolfin and pulls a wry face—definitely the sort of discussion one would wish only to have if one had managed to arrange a secure exit beforehand.

He sighs and gets up from the floor. It would be easy, indeed it would be surprisingly easy just to remain on his knees in contemplation until Fingon arrives. But it might be quite some time before his cousin manages to free himself of his royal duties and obligations, and he should find a way to make use of the intervening time if he can.

Still, as he arises, he cannot help wondering what it might be like to be part of a normal couple. If he and Fingon were ordinary lovers, would they be squabbling over little day-to-day things and making up again as ordinary lovers do? He does not recall any petty squabbling in Valinor, not before everything went far more wrong than that, but of course his young cousin hero-worshipped him then. Fingon certainly knows better now.

The thought of normality tantalizes, but eludes Maedhros; he cannot get a grip on it. Since Thangorodrim, there has been plenty of routine, sometimes too much of it, but no normality. Normality excludes such as him.

Maybe it is these musings that set off an unfamiliar train of thought as, in passing, he glimpses himself in the dressing-table mirror, or maybe it is those memories of long-ago Valinor. He sees, for once, someone other than the ex-prisoner of Angband, the current Head of the House of Feanor, the Lord of Himring—and he asks himself whether that plain grey attire of his perhaps does not look a little drab after all? Is that hairstyle not a little bit too severe, compared to silky black braids threaded with gold? In short, might he look somehow unappreciative of his expected visitor?

By no means would he wish to seem unappreciative!  But standing in front of his dressing-table and casting his eye over it for anything that might lend just a little splash of colour, he finds himself rather at a loss. There are the jewelled combs in their box, of course. Thumbnail-sized emeralds are excellently suited for impressing sceptical Noldorin lords, but quite out of place in a bed-chamber—he would look absolutely ridiculous in them.

Then he spots a length of ribbon, dropped carelessly next to his comb and brush. Now where did that come from?  Vaguely, he remembers that the table decoration at the evening’s banquet was styled in these colours.  Blue and silver—Fingon’s colours—the idea appeals to him that he could be wearing them, just this evening, privately.

He picks it up—and then it hits him, the way it sometimes does.  Maedhros Feanorion who pretends in his hubris to be the great master strategist capable of saving all Beleriand from the Dark that threatens it—and yet it is a real tactical problem for him to tie a simple, ordinary bow…  

At that moment, he sees a movement in the mirror, his eyes meet Fingon’s as he slips through the open door beside the fireplace, and he knows he has let himself be caught.

***

Fingon sees his cousin clutching a bit of ribbon to his temple with his left hand, the stump of his right wrist pointing uselessly at the back of his head, and instantly remembers:

…how he bashed the damaged hand against the rock in his futile attempt to break the manacle and damaged it still further, how difficult it was to get the right angle and enough space to swing for a clean cut, how he almost dropped Maedhros straight down the cliff once he had finally cut him loose and how he almost plummeted right after him, how eagles are not really designed as a means of a transportation, how he spent hours clutching a stinking scarecrow to his chest, wondering whether it still had a heartbeat…

..all frantic, all bungled, right from the moment he almost released the arrow straight into his cousin’s chest after all because he was so startled by the eagle’s sudden appearance—so feverishly, so stubbornly determined not to squander his unexpected reprieve—only, when he pulled free of Turukano’s clutches and stumbled across, against all expectations the awkward bundle of skin and bones he had deposited in his father’s arms turned out to be still breathing…

How much all or any of that meant to his cousin, even at the time, he does not know. He thinks he remembers seeing a rather bemused look on Maedhros’s face, as if he felt Fingon was going about killing him in an unusually complicated way but was too polite to comment. Between what came before and what came after, perhaps he barely noticed, if one can be said not to have noticed receiving a wound that caused almost immediate physical collapse.

Since then, Maedhros has been dealing with being a cripple every day, just as he deals with other things, the legacy of his father, the memory of Angband.  He only ever seems to remember that Fingon had anything to do with it when he sees Fingon remembering it. Just as now, in the mirror, those grey eyes meeting his widen in recognition, realization, rising consternation… 

Fingon does not wait for consternation to turn into the apologetic look he hates. He does not see it often but it goes with words like wrong and burden. He quickly crosses the room, plucks the ribbon from Maedhros’s hand and ties it around a strand of red hair as thick as his index finger.  The bow falls to rest on Maedhros’s cheek.

‘Did you want it like this?’

‘Thank you,’ says Maedhros with real gratitude and begins to turn away from the mirror, only to find himself caught from behind in a rib-cracking hug. He feels the pressure of Fingon’s forehead as his cousin buries his face in his back.

He stands quite still, clamping his teeth shut against the apology that is trying to emerge, knowing it would only make things worse.

‘It was a long day’, he finally ventures hesitantly, by way of compromise.

Fingon’s grip on him eases and shifts.

‘Too long?’, his voice enquires somewhere below Maedhros’s right ear, still slightly muffled.

Relieved, he answers : ‘Well now, that depends. If you were about to suggest a night out on the town, I would have to regretfully refuse…’

Fingon’s grip shifts again and his voice is clearer now.

‘No, I was not going to suggest that.’

***

The following proceedings would be remarkable for how completely irrelevant the word unappreciative is to any part of them—that is, if Maedhros were even capable of remembering in Fingon’s presence that he had ever entertained such a ridiculous notion.

‘Please…oh please’, he says under his breath.

It is an involuntary prayer to an unknown god to permit Fingon to go on being Fingon, and only indirectly has anything to do with what Fingon’s lips and hands are doing at the moment. Fingon pauses and looks up. He feels that bit of ribbon he tied in Maedhros’s hair earlier on slide across his face. The silver thread is a little scratchy. And what he sees beyond that makes him steer Maedhros gently towards the bed.

Fingon is not feeling underappreciated at all.

***

Inevitably, at some point the ribbon must have slipped off. Fingon’s hand encounters it among the sheets as he turns around. He fishes it out and shows it to his cousin, the bow still intact.

‘May I keep it?’, he asks.

Maedhros, who has meanwhile forgiven himself—provisionally, only ever provisionally—gives a small snort of suppressed laughter.

‘But it was yours all along’, he says. ‘It must have been part of the table decoration, tonight, I think’, he confesses, ‘I do believe it was tied around one of the candle sticks.’

Fingon takes a quick look at his cousin’s tousled head resting on the pillow beside him. Maedhros looks a little embarrassed but mainly content to be where he is. Just now, Fingon’s arm, slung as if casually across his waist, is normality enough for him.

‘I know’, Fingon says calmly.

He was watching, earlier—sitting  across from his cousin as he glittered on the other side of the table—how  Maedhros’s fingers started fiddling unconsciously with the ribbon around the candlestick, while he soothed yet more fears, deflected yet another polite attack.  It was the only sign of exhaustion in his cousin that he had observed all that day.

Now he remembers how Maedhros reacted when, a while ago, he told him about the single hair folded in a slip of parchment that he has carried around with him for years.

‘Just one?’, his cousin asked him, shaking out his mane above Fingon's face so that it flowed all about his head and shoulders like a red tent. ‘Have more! Have all of it!’

Fingon looked up into his cousin's shadowed face, so close to laughter, so close to tears.

‘People might notice if you went bald all of a sudden,’ he replied.

Then he wound his hands in the silky strands and pulled Maedhros's head down.

‘You see’, he explains now, twirling the loop of silver around once in his fingers, ‘I can carry it openly and no one will ever know.’

He sees that Maedhros understands what he is saying although he does not answer in words. That slight air of embarrassment has disappeared.  Knowing his cousin does not feel any chill, Fingon nevertheless draws the bedcover up higher about his shoulders to exclude the damp night air.

Chapter 2

After the Nirnaeth Arnoediad.

Mainly, an orc.

Warning for some orcishness.

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Scum feels a whine rise in his throat as he surveys the expanse of churned black earth. Oh, to be sure, he knew all along that if the higher-ups were prepared to let him cross the battlefield alone and un-supervised, all the best pickings would already be gone. But this! Miles and miles of blood-soaked mud mixed with ashes, long dried. Hardly even a bone or a bit of scrap iron. Such a big, big battle, so many dead! Surely there must be something left, something worth finding.

But he won’t have much time to look for it. If he takes too long to arrive at the other end, the punishment he receives will be worse than a beating. It is not as if anyone had actually given him permission to go looking. On the other hand, that means that if he does find something, they may not take it off him right away…

The wind turns a little and a gust from the direction of the Mound reminds him where most of the bones have gone. The stench is enough to make even an orc gag. Still, that would be the place to investigate, of course! But he dare not risk it.

The truth is: he doesn’t understand what the higher-ups are playing at, with that mound. So much work for nothing! Such a waste of good food! He supposes the idea is to intimidate the rest of the filthy rebels. But surely even those arrogant maniacs from Overseas won’t be stupid enough to hang around gawking at the Mound! They’ll all have taken to their heels, the ones that survived, if they know at all what is good for them. Except for the ones in chains of course—but somehow Scum doesn’t think those will need much impressing, down in the mines. Still, it is something to know that high-and-mighty elven lords stink as much as the rest when they are just so much rotten meat.  

Oh well. He’ll just have to keep his eye out as he trots along. Maybe, if he sees a likely spot, just a little bit of digging… He begins to jog—and goes on jogging. Even at orc-speed it is a long way.  And there is nothing: miles of nothing.

He reaches the area where they say the fighting was hardest, on the western side. Here, perhaps? He stops and scratches around a bit, without much hope. It looks as if someone’s been over the ground with a fine tooth comb.

Just as he is about to give up, he catches just a glimpse of… There, there something is glinting in the pale light of a dim sun. Hurriedly, he scrapes away dust and ashes and…

His gorge rises. He starts cursing bitterly. It is only a bit of ribbon, silver and blue. He spits and grinds it under his heel.

Curse them! Curse those dirty, treacherous, murderous bastards and their nasty flaming eyes!  They owed him something, they did! All he asked for was just a little bit of treasure, just a little something to get everyone off his back, something to buy him a bit of space! Just so they’d leave him alone a little, the higher-ups. Oh yes, and maybe enough for a decent meal or two as well. They owed him! And instead, this bit of frippery here. He feels he is being mocked by the fallen Noldor.

He spits again. Then his shoulders sag in defeat as another stunted dream of freedom dies.  He starts to move off, hesitates, turns back and claws the bit of ribbon out of the dirt again. It is worthless, but it is all he has and he’ll just have to try and make something of it.

***

Poor Scum! Like others at the bottom of the pile, he prides himself on his realism. But what he hasn’t admitted to himself is this: if he had managed to find his bit of real treasure, if he had come back with a thumbnail-sized emerald like the one in Azaghal’s combs, the most likely thing it would have earned him is a beating as they took it off him, maybe even a torn-out throat.

***

Azaghal is dead, too, now of course. It is no longer necessary to take account of his sensibilities.

‘Curvo’, says Maedhros to his brother, a little distantly, a little too politely, ‘how much trouble is that leg-wound of yours giving you? Do you think you could you prise the stones and the pearls out of these combs, carefully, without damaging them? I think they will serve us best now if we exchange them one by one for what we need. Thank you very much. Oh, and return the combs themselves to me, please. I would like to keep them for now.’


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This is beautiful. You killed me with the love-making which is not described at all. Less was certainly more in this case.

Also loved this:

‘Just one?’, his cousin asked him, shaking out his mane above Fingon's face so that it flowed all about his head and shoulders like a red tent. ‘Have more! Have all of it!’ It reminded me very much of a picture on Deviant Art, that I cannot find at the moment of course of Maedhros comforting Fingon after the death of Fingolfin, embracing him from behind with his red hair falling over the two of them.

Thank you very much for this again!

Although, as I told you, I know Eilian's picture on DeviantArt, I think the passage you quote actually owes a little to a story of Cirdan's (in quite a different context, though) and also probably to a non-Tolkien story, except I can't reconstruct which it might have been; perhaps it was by Robin McKinley.

I do hope and believe I've made it all my own, though!

This was a fantastic read. I loved your take on Maedhros and Fingon's relationship faced with the physical and mental consequences of Thangorodrim, and the unassuming resolution of it. And that's apart from the brilliant choice of focus, the writing, and the tone of the whole piece. If only MEFA nominations were open now... you even made me feel sorry for the orc.

What a wonderful thing to say! Or rather, so many wonderful things! Thank you! I'm so glad this piece worked for you and especially the take on Maedhros and Fingon's relationship. Sometimes I'm afraid I'm being rather self-indulgent when I write yet another piece about the two of them together...

In fact, Fingon practically commanded him to leave the door open for him. Arguably, he is demonstrating Feanorian loyalty to the High King by acceding to his wishes. He briefly imagines trying to use that argument to defend his actions before the late High King Fingolfin and pulls a wry face—definitely the sort of discussion one would wish only to have if one had managed to arrange a secure exit beforehand.

::lol:: I don’t know what I like better: that Fingon commanded him to leave the door open, or the look on Fingolfin’s face if Maedhros told him that.

Blue and silver—Fingon’s colours—the idea appeals to him that he could be wearing them, just this evening, privately.

<3 He could keep a ribbon with Fingon’s colours hidden, just like Fingon kept his strand of hair…  but even that Maedhros would consider too great a risk. Also, they may not be a normal couple, but Maedhros worrying about how he looked was an incredibly normal moment.

an involuntary prayer to an unknown god to permit Fingon to go on being Fingon,

That was beautiful, and sad, knowing that Fingon will go on being Fingon… once he’s released from Mandos.

 ‘You see’, he explains now, twirling the loop of silver around once in his fingers, ‘I can carry it openly and no one will ever know.’

That’s the closest to a wedding ring they could get. I’m happy Fingon died wearing it… and that just shows what a tragic couple they are.

Lovely story. I’m even feeling sorry for the orc, because even if someone explained to it why that ribbon was so valuable, it wouldn’t understand.

No, poor orc, it wouldn't have a chance of understanding the value of that ribbon!

I'm glad that you like that bit about Fingolfin, considering the conversation we just had about him. Because, you know, it's not really meant to be unfair to Fingolfin, not on my part and not on Maedhros's either.

And I'm happy that the other lines you quote came across so well! Thank you for telling me so!

I've enjoyed many things about this fic, which I only found today.

First of all, the ribbon, the focus of the story. How something worthless becomes a treasure because of its meaning to two people, and once his bearer is dead, it reverts back to its former sparkling insignificance. The disappointment of the Orc when he could find nothing better and his sense of having been cheated were almost pathetic, when you consider the value of the ribbon as a symbol between the lovers. I liked the introduction of the hair combs to provide the contrast against the ribbon. They may be high in material value but not really wanted by Maedhros, except as the means to dazzle his allies and potentially, to provide money to supply to his people.

Linked to the combs, I loved the realistic portrayal of routine, of forging alliances, of projecting an expected image before allies, of carrying on with life as a leader after all the heroic deeds have been done.

But most of all I admired the sense of intimacy built between Maedhros and Fingon, and how they appreciate that what they’ve gone through and what they are must set them apart from the “normality” they might have once enjoyed. Angband and the war has made normality impossible, and still they find a balance, contentment and love, at least for a while. And yes, the love scene between them, without being explicit, was lovely, too!

 

Himring- you just knocked me out with this. It's too sad. Bad enough the tale of Maedhors as Tolkien tells it, in its starkness alone, but to give it all the love, affection and tenderness you give them in the first chapter, and then ..No. I cant write any sort of review right now. You made me cry.

OK- ready to write more coherently now. I am very moved by this and genuinely felt I needed to tell you that but how? The layers and layers you build into this are exquisite and poignant - and then turn tragic. You never show us Fingon's body and its as much by omission that you make this such a tender  piece. That link with the combs which are jewelled and signify merely a political alliance contrast so beautifully with the ribbon -not even a hiar ribbon but simply a bit of ribbon around a candlestick for decoration. And that is what Fingon holds onto- even at his death. That it is mere Orc salvage emphasises the pathos actually- it has no idea of the significance. (I actually felt some empathy for Scum)

There are those very subtle touches, 

‘Curvo’, says Maedhros to his brother, a little distantly, a little too politely,

that speak volumes for their subtlety rather than the hyperbolic shouting and breast beating that other characters might go in for and the secrect nature of their relationship makes it all the more tragic. 

The simplicity too of the previous chapter, focuses on intimacy not epic romance. I love that domesticity, the closeness - brushing hair, holding up a ribbon (and cannot tie it  ofcourse!) and Fingon having his amr across Maedhros' waist- that detail is lovely.

As always, you write sublimely.