"Two Epitaphs" and "A Merry Feast" by Himring
Fanwork Notes
"Two Epitaphs": two short poems--one about the death of Morwen, wife of Hurin, the other about the death of Rian, wife of Huor. The two were cousins; exiles from Dorthonion, they both saw their new life in Dor-lomin destroyed by the Nirnaeth Arnoediad, in different ways, with different consequences.
"A Merry Feast": Morwen & Hurin, before and after the Nirnaeth Arnoediad
Fanwork Information
Summary: Short Pieces about Morwen and Rian. Now added: A Merry Feast: Morwen & Hurin, before and after the Nirnaeth Arnoediad
Major Characters: Húrin, Morwen, Rían Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet, Poetry Challenges: Rating: Teens Warnings: Character Death |
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Chapters: 3 | Word Count: 1, 313 |
Posted on 24 July 2012 | Updated on 4 February 2014 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Morwen
Didactic cinquain, originally written for the B2MeM 2012 prompt "cinquain" on the "Poetic Forms" card.
Read Morwen
Morwen,
grey, weary,
after long wandering,
died unanswered but unconquered,
Elfsheen.
Chapter End Notes
The Silmarillion: "He looked down at her in the twilight and it seemed to him that the lines of grief and cruel hardship were smoothed away. 'She was not conquered,' he said; and he closed her eyes, and sat unmoving beside her as the night drew down."
For further background, see Oshun's biography of Morwen here.
Rian
Read Rian
So many tears.
Numbered.
Chapter End Notes
Nirnaeth Arnoediad means "(battle of) unnumbered tears".
Rian, having entrusted her new-born son to the care of others, sought out the mound of those slain in the battle, lay down and died.
Rian was a maker of songs, according to Tolkien. For the text of a song written by Rian (before her marriage), see now my story: I shall not look on your white walls again
A Merry Feast
True drabble written for the prompt Wine in the Mulled Wine Challenge at Tolkien Weekly on LiveJournal
Morwen & Hurin, before and after the Nirnaeth.
Warning for Mature Themes (veiled allusions to canonical battle, violence, torture, all implied only)
Read A Merry Feast
"Let us think that at this midwinter the feast shall be merrier than in all our years yet,” he said and she tried to hold that thought. But she remembered another winter when the night was without moon, the plain stretched dim beneath the stars, and watch-fires burned low. That winter, life as she knew it had ended, and so this second life, too, might end.
For all that, she could not stop waiting for him. Midwinter came and she was still listening for the sound of his horse. There was no wine. She drank his health in cold water.
Chapter End Notes
Hurin's words are a literal quotation (CoH / Unfinished Tales). The description of the winter night in which the Battle of Sudden Flame erupted, leading to the destruction of Morwen's home and the death of most of her family, is closely based on the Silmarillion.
I had been reading the prompt list for B2MeM 2014, in which both these quotations appear as a prompts.
Morwen listening for the neigh of Hurin's horse Arroch is also canonical.
(1) Comment by Elleth for "Two Epitaphs" and "A Me... [Ch 1]
I loved the Morwen poem back during B2MeM, but Rian's epitaph hit me like a punch in the gut. Very, very well done.
Re: (1) Comment by Elleth for "Two Epitaphs" and "A Me... [Ch 1]
Thank you very much, Elleth!
Unlike the Morwen poem, Rian's epitaph came unbidden--I wasn't even aware I was thinking about her, until, suddenly, I was.
(2) Comment by Elleth for "Two Epitaphs" and "A Me... [Ch 3]
I've grown inexplicably fond of the Edain recently, so seeing this expanded is wonderful and painful at once - the drabble, at any rate, is excellent.
Re: (2) Comment by Elleth for "Two Epitaphs" and "A Me... [Ch 3]
Thank you very much, Elleth!
I do not think it is so very inexplicable, being fond of the Edain. Not for the faint-hearted perhaps, though, given what happens to some of them...
I hope to continue the drabble sequence about Aerin and Broddun soon.
(3) Comment by Robinka for "Two Epitaphs" and "A M... [Ch 2]
This grabs by the throat and doesn't want to let go.
Re: (3) Comment by Robinka for "Two Epitaphs" and "A M... [Ch 2]
Rian: such a brief story and so very sad.
Thank you!