Price of a Broken Promise by Himring

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Erendis has given up on her errant husband and is no longer waiting for Aldarion to return from his voyage to Middle-earth. Or so she says.

Originally written for B2MeM 2012, but posted here for Akallabeth-in-August and to go with Oshun's excellent new biography of Erendis.

Major Characters: Erendis

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: General

Challenges: Akallabêth in August

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Mature Themes

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 549
Posted on 2 August 2012 Updated on 2 August 2012

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Chapter 1

Oshun's bio of Erendis is here:

http://www.silmarillionwritersguild.org/reference/characterofthemonth/erendis.php

Read Chapter 1

She has sworn not to do this to herself again. Even as she gets up and dresses in the dark, she tells herself she will not do it. Nevertheless, soon she is astride her mare Izre, leaving Emerie behind in the intense pre-dawn chill, blackness of sheep invisible against the blackness of the fields. Dawn overtakes her on the way to the coast.

The precipitous path down into the cove is all too familiar. So is the empty beach and the empty sea. The last time she was here, though, it was warmer. Today, the grey, pathetic excuse for sunlight barely seems to illuminate the waves.  As she paces along the strip of firm moist sand between the water and the dunes, the wind, never entirely still along this coast, rises and carries sleet with it—sleet, not quite snow, not yet, but there is no avoiding the conclusion: it is winter, too late in the year for voyaging on the high seas.  It is another year in which Aldarion will not come.

He is holed up in Mithlond, no doubt, hobnobbing with elven royalty, quaffing mulled wine with Gil-galad or Cirdan, warm and comfortable and safe, having forgotten his promise to his wife. She tries to hold that thought, but the wind rises and it blows away with the sleet. She walks along the shore, and she thinks of all the dangers of Middle-earth she has heard of. All the sad old tales come alive in her memory, how Barahir died and Gorlim and Huor and Turin. No, that was before Morgoth was defeated—but still there are manifold dangers in Middle-earth: orcs and trolls and dragons. But there is no reason to think that Aldarion has encountered any of them, is there?

The wind reaches for her with cold wet fingers. She forgets to keep an eye on the waves and one comes in and laps at her feet, drenching her shoes. The sea is her enemy—and inevitably she begins thinking of shipwreck, storms at sea, torn sails and broken masts, fogs, treacherous currents and insidious rocks, mangled corpses afloat among the sea wrack, bones sinking to the ocean floor—oh, to be Queen Almarian, serene, patient and steadfast, stitching away at her embroidery in Armenelos, seemingly confident that all it takes is time and if only she waits long enough, her son will be returned safe and sound to her just as he was, except perhaps a little wiser...

The sea is her enemy. The wind from the sea carries the icy moisture that easily penetrates her warmest cloak. Her hair drips, clammy against her neck. She is soaking wet, right down to her underwear.

By the time Erendis reaches Emerie again, she is white and numb, so stiff with cold she can hardly loosen her fingers from the reins or speak. Zamin raises a great outcry, pulls her off her horse, drags her into the house and bathes her like a small child, scolding her fiercely all the while. She wraps Erendis in a woollen dressing gown and half a dozen blankets and virtually forces camomile tea laced with honey down her throat. Gratefully, Erendis feels warmth creep through her limbs again. Only in her chest, something refuses to thaw and has once again grown harder, colder.

 


Chapter End Notes

The B2MeM prompts for this story were: "Women of Numenor" (Women of the Silmarillion), "Cove" (Landscape) and "Sleet" (Weather).


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Oh, Himring, this is excellent. The tone and pitch of it is perfect. I can absolute imagine her doing that and her thoughts about it are exactly what I would imagine as well.

I love her annoyance at the idea of him "hobnobbing with elven royalty, quaffing mulled wine with Gil-galad or Cirdan, warm and comfortable and safe" to the growing admission her anger is based upon fear and her thoughts shift to "torn sails and masts, fogs, treacherous currents and insidious rocks, mangled corpses afloat among the sea wrack, bones sinking to the ocean floor."

Like it so! And thanks for recommending the character bio. I had a lot of fun writing. Now I am kicking myself for not including the parts about her bringing the bough for the prow of his ship. Yep! I think I am going to be finding myself writing some Eldarion and Erendis fanfic in the near future also.

Thank you very much, Oshun! As you've just worked your way through the canon on Erendis, it means a lot to me that you find this sketch of her convincing! 

I did notice you had not mentioned the bough. But there were lots of things in that bio that I had half-forgotten about the story and was delighted to be reminded of. Also, as always, your comments  threw an interesting new light on things I had taken too much for granted or not thought through very clearly.

And I'm looking forward very much to reading Erendis fan fic by you!