Middle-earth Poetry (Silmarillion version) by Zdenka
Fanwork Notes
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Summary:
Tolkien-related poetry on various subjects, mostly written for B2MeM. (I've only cross-posted the Silmarillion poems here; the version on AO3 and MPTT includes the LOTR-related ones also.)
Major Characters: Erendis, Inzilbêth, Maeglin, Men
Major Relationships:
Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet, Het, Poetry, Slash/Femslash
Challenges: B2MeM 2012, Tolkien Femslash Week Bingo
Rating: Teens
Warnings: Character Death, Mature Themes, Violence (Mild)
Chapters: 4 Word Count: 6, 366 Posted on 17 May 2016 Updated on 17 July 2016 This fanwork is a work in progress.
A Lost Song
Spoken by descendants of the first Men to enter Beleriand (as told in in "The Coming of Men Into the West" from the Silmarillion). (Tanka.)
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The song of Finrod
that he sang to our fathers,
does the sea hold it?
When Beleriand was drowned,
did the waves catch its echo?
Chapter End Notes
Written for Back to Middle-earth Month 2012. Prompts O70: "Poetic Forms: tanka" and "Book Titles: Dead Poets Society."
The Fall
Maeglin at the Fall of Gondolin. (Free verse.)
Warnings: Non-graphic violent death, attempted harm to a child.
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Too late, Maeglin sees his folly:
the Dark One never meant to keep his promises.
You will be spared, and those you favor.
Gondolin will cringe before you, my viceroy;
white-footed Idril
and all you can desire will be yours.
No, not so.
The dragons pour flame from every side,
their fierce jaws gaping.
Through the breached walls, the orcish hordes rush in.
Nothing will be spared, and no one.
Already the gold tree is aflame, and the silver tree follows.
But Idril – not her! She is too fair to perish
in the wrack of this unworthy city.
With Tuor gone, perhaps she might love him, even yet –
Quicker than the thought, he seizes her,
drags her from her dwelling –
the child cries, hinders him.
Son of Tuor! Let him perish. At the least
he’ll not be robbed of his revenge.
The city wall is near – but a moment,
and Tuor’s son will never cry again to vex him.
Calamity! Suddenly returned,
Tuor falls upon him like an eagle.
A moment more, hurled forth –
clutching air, falling –
and he is cast into darkness without a star.
Chapter End Notes
Written for Back to Middle-earth Month 2012. Prompts B13: "Poetic Forms: free verse" and G59: "Cause of Death: Falling."
Erendis to Aldarion
Erendis has doubts over Aldarion’s courtship. (Sapphics.)
- Read Erendis to Aldarion
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If the King’s son wishes to wed Erendis,
let not joy be followed by later sorrow.
I would fain, Aldarion, trust your promise,
yet my heart doubts you.To the kingly line, longer life is given;
you may spend the years as you wish, unthinking.
But to me a far lesser span is granted;
I cannot tarry.Will you give me all of your heart as husband?
Can you put aside the sea-longing for me?
Will I, half a widow, wait for your coming
through the long seasons?Love me or do not – I’ll have no half-measures.
I am not a game for your times of leisure.
‘Tis no game to me; if you truly love me,
love me in earnest.
Chapter End Notes
Written for Back to Middle-earth Month 2012. Prompts O64: "Book Title: The Importance of Being Earnest" and "Poetic Forms: Sapphic."
The Unfinished Poem
Taken from her house in order to wed the King, Inzilbêth tries to express her feelings in poetry to the woman she loves. (Sapphic verse. Also a true drabble, as counted by MS Word.)
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Oh my love, my thoughts are in such disorder,
just like ants, their colony broken open,
when the small black bodies run frantic, seeking
hither and thither.Gimilzôr the King--he would have me wed him.
This must be a bitter charade of marriage;
how can there be gladness between us when my
heart is unwilling?From the King come jewels I take no joy in;
but to you, since fate did not wish us happy,
one last gift, this necklace of golden amber,
ere I must leave you.Only moments left--and the poem I started
still is unfinished--
Chapter End Notes
Written for the Silmarillion Writers' Guild/Silmladylove Tolkien Femslash Week Bingo, for the prompts:
Formats and Genres: Sapphic Stanza (O43)
Four Words: charade, amber, colony, moment (I12)
Opposites Attract: star-crossed lovers (O43)The Akallabêth in the Silmarillion tells how Ar-Gimilzôr was a king of Númenor who scorned the Valar, and hated and distrusted the Elf-friends. Inzilbêth, who was "renowned for her beauty," was kin to the Lords of Andúnië and secretly one of the Faithful. Ar-Gimilzôr married her against her will, and "No love was there between Ar-Gimilzôr and his queen."
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