Something to chew on. by ford_of_bruinen

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Fanwork Notes

Beta: Enismirdal
Pairing: Mablung/ Saeros
Warnings: None really unless a fluff/humour warning should be applied...

Request: First Age, before Saeros died (necrophilia just isn't very Christmas-y)... both emotionally strong characters (as they were); prior to Turin showing up in Doriath would be most awesome, but I understand the bunnies sometimes run rampant... let's see... damn, I just know I'm calling myself out on it asking for this, but, oh well... if there's a way to include cheesecake, or goats, it would make me all the more happy ^_^ (poor person getting this is just now thinking '...great, I get the freak assignment...', lol)
Do not include: No death!! Um, rather not have rape or noncon or anything too bad; some angstiness could be fun. However the muses go on it.. it's a more difficult pairing, so I hate to put up a lot of limitations.

 

Author’s note: I know this is not *quite* what you probably had in mind but it was the best I could do this year. Also a big thank you to Keiliss, without her this would not have been written and I would still try to find an angle for this story :)

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Fanwork Information

Summary:

Mablung and Saeros enjoy a day of seduction in the woods of Doriath, at least until they realise they are in the prescence of a voyeuristic goat...

Written for Zhie in the 2007 Slashy Santa exchange.

Major Characters: Mablung, Saeros

Major Relationships:

Genre: Humor, Slash/Femslash

Challenges:

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Sexual Content (Mild)
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 1, 273
Posted on 24 December 2007 Updated on 24 December 2007

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*wipes the tears from laughter from her eyes* Uli, you wrote a fabulous story given the challenge request. I just love how you wrote these two characters, especially Saeros just sounds so like him (impatient and loooves an audience) and ai poor Mablung, just getting distracted all along by a goat. *snicker* poor guys, hehehe.

This is great. So funny and still erotic. I am an absolute fan of good dialogue and you handled it beautifully here. (I've been trying to resist saying I would love to have been one of those goats, but that sounds so nasty, yet, when have I ever been discreet. It's all fantasy writing afterall.)

Well they may have been more worth watching if the goats had hidden a bit better ;)

 Thank you for the compliments, it was, once i started it, a suprisingly easy fic to write but it took me weeks and weeks of agonising to find the angle. Funny how a lot of my later stuff leans heavyish on dialougue which i normally find is soemwhat of a struggle :)

 

*hugs* 

All right, the names of Mablung and Saeros drew my attention immediately, and after a long debate with myself: to read or not to read, given the 'slash' warning, I decided to give the story a go, and I can admit I'm very glad I did.

It's funny, wonderfully written, very enjoyable, and shines with such wit I wish I could pour into my own writing. :)

Thanks for sharing.

Binka

Thank you for reading it despite it being slash. I know it isn't usually your kind of thing

Also I am very glad that, deciding to try it, you enjoyed it :) It means I must have done somethign right. It was, I must admit fun to write too, partly because of the outragousness of the whole idea.

 Thanks for reading

 Uli