Death to the Young by Kaylee Arafinwiel

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Fanwork Notes

Written for some of the B2MEM prompts over at Spring Into Arda/Fall for Tolkien. Death. Lots of it. This is the fall of Doriath. Also, nothing in canon says Celebrimbor has a son but nothing says he didn't, either.  That bit is a reference to my fic "A Warning Denied"  https://www.silmarillionwritersguild.org/node/1816/single?page=0

Fanwork Information

Summary:

As Dior lays dying, yearning to reach twin boys taken from his care, something deep within him cracks and slams into place. There's more of his grandmother Melian in him that he ever thought he would inherit. 
 

Major Characters: Dior

Major Relationships: Dior/Nimloth

Genre: Horror

Challenges:

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Character Death

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 455
Posted on 1 March 2022 Updated on 1 March 2022

This fanwork is complete.

Chapter 1

For B2MEM 2022. Dior's death from his and his sons' POV.

This is the fall of Doriath. There are a lot of dead bodies. 

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Everything had been fine, until the murders began. Oh, Dior remembered well the warning of Celebrindor son of Celebrimbor – a warning denied. He had laughed in the elfling’s face, sent him packing back to his accursed kin. 

Then, too, he had denied the warnings of the prophetess Maerwen – the great-granddaughter of Daireth the Seer. She had protested that Doriath would fall, that the Sons of Feanor were near – but was he not Eluchil? Was he not the Heir of Elu, the blood of Melian the Maia? 

Dior struggled to take a breath, head reeling, and clambered to his feet, pressing his hand to his side. That same blood that bound him to Elu and Melian was spilling upon the ground. He stepped over Celegorm’s body, stumbling out into the cavernous Halls. 

_I must find my children,_ he thought, gulping another breath as he staggered along. Death and the dying were all around him; servants, guards, ladies-in-waiting. He spotted Calemmiriel, one of the Lady Galadriel’s entourage, in the arms of her beloved Mallor and realization hit him. _Galadriel! Celeborn!_ 

He pressed onward to the nursery, steadying himself on the wall. The day nursery was empty. The night nursery’s door hung limply from its hinges. He stumbled through, and among the wreckage saw Elwing’s overturned cradle. She – and the Silmaril – were gone.

The boys’ beds were empty, but it was clear they had not yet been slept in. Dior struggled to reach for his sons’ fae, seeking them out, and staggered out of the nursery again. 

He made it as far as the solar. Around a pool where colourful fish had darted to and fro, now fouled by blood – Nimloth’s and her handmaidens’ – flowers had grown in profusion in an open-air cavern, under the light of Anor. Now Ithil had taken her place, fair and cold.

The only one not there was Galadriel.

Dior collapsed to his knees beside Nimloth’s lifeless form, praying that Galadriel had managed to save Elwing in time – and the Silmaril.

_How ironic, that I look to a Noldo to be the saving of my people._

_Not so,_ came a long-missed voice to his mind. _For Galadriel learned her lessons well, daerion._

_Daernaneth,_ Dior thought dizzily. He lay his head on Nimloth’s breast, straining futilely for a heartbeat as his lifeblood slowly spilled out to join hers.

That was how the twin princes found their parents when they ran in, the servants of Celegorm giving chase. 
They were too shocked to react, or do more than scream and bite when their captors caught up to them.

All the while, fair Ithil regarded Dior and his slain kingdom with cold indifference.


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Oh Dior, you had warning they were coming, but in your arrogance you didn't see this coming. 

I like that his Grandmother still speaks to him, reassuring him that her student learned well... and that Galadriel came and saved Elwing and the jewel.

But so terribly, terribly sad that she hadn't found the twins in time, and sadder still that they found their parents' bodies before they themselves were taken.

And Tilion watches as Ithil passively shines light on events from on high...

Yes, exactly :(

Melian does her best to comfort her grandson in his dying moments. She had to leave Doriath for reasons that were not entirely her choice (I feel, anyway, that Elu's death would have pulled her West, but I'm not sure how canon that is) but I'm sure she still watches her descendants and communes with them when possible.

Galadriel did her best. At least she rescued Elwing, and the Silmaril, though the poor boys :( 

Sadly, there's not much Tilion can do about anything, so I fear he's becoming rather detached. I also HC that he was a friend of Celegorm back in Aman, as Orome's Maia, though I doubt he ever thought Celegorm would do something like *this*.

Omg, Kaylee! 

This is brilliantly written! You have such a way with words and the images they give... wow!

Whenever I can, I sooo enjoy reading your fics.