The Embalmer's Apprentice by Lyra

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Fanwork Notes

Contains references to corporal and capital punishment, a rather medieval law code and colonialist attitudes that may be upsetting to some readers.

Many thanks to Elleth and Dawn for their proof- and betareading patience on the first chapters! I also owe a huge debt of gratitude to Himring, Whitewave and Thai for their unflagging loyalty and encouragement.

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Fanwork Information

Summary:

Faced with the choice between execution or working on the preservation of dead people, young Azruhâr finds himself drawn into an increasingly political struggle between faith and power, tradition and new ideas - and a journey beyond his wildest fears and dreams.

Major Characters: Original Character(s), Herucalmo, Tar-Ancalimon, Tar-Telemmaitë

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Drama

Challenges: Akallabêth in August, Arda Underground, Middle-earth Olympics

Rating: Adult

Warnings: Check Notes for Warnings, Expletive Language, In-Universe Classism, In-Universe Racism/Ethnocentrism, Mature Themes, Sexual Content (Mild), Torture, Violence (Moderate)

Chapters: 69 Word Count: 446, 721
Posted on 4 February 2010 Updated on 29 October 2024

This fanwork is a work in progress.

Table of Contents

Well, look who wrote a new chapter after almost three years! So, off to Andúnië!

Matters of great importance are being discussed, people are playing in the sand, and Andúnië continues to be highly idealised. Somewhere has to be.

Azruhâr has impressed the right people; time to pick a fight with the wrong people. Violence warning applies.

Azruhâr does some heavy thinking, and has to appear at the palace again. Amraphel covers the research.

Things progress uncomfortably, and Azruhâr's good deed has unexpected consequences.

Azruhâr enlarges his household, has some awkward conversations, meets the executioner and the in-laws.

Another happy Andúnië chapter.

There is a lot of crying in this chapter, some of it justified. -- Warning for the death of a supporting character.

Warning for some violence, and the death of a major supporting character.

Aaand we have a new King.

Story warnings apply to the second half of this chapter. Not a happy one, I'm afraid.

It's not getting better. >_>

Torture warning applies.

Trial time!

Warnings for the aftermath of the torment and vaguely suicidal thoughts.

 

Warning for discussions of suicide, and the off-screen suicide of a supporting character.

Warning for animal death. It's a hunting trip, after all.

Time to explore the darker sides of Umbar (and of Lord Herucalmo). Violence/torture warning applies, I guess.

The trip to the mines has unpleasant consequences. Help comes from an unexpected quarter.

Azruhâr finally meets the apprentices. Intercultural communications are harder than expected.

Warning for some violence and talk about human sacrifice. What are we getting ourselves into?

This chapter covers some prompts for the Middle-earth Olympics (athletics; boxing; wrestling - both literally and figuratively). That is accidental, but I'm going to take it.

Another difficult chapter.

The spring festival is there at last.

Warning for athletic injuries and unnamed background character death(s).

This is a grim one. Warning for (non-graphic) mentions of childbirth going pear-shaped. If that's a touchy subject for you, I recommend skipping this chapter.

Warning for dark-ish themes and background character death.

A (short) chapter of returns.

Azruhâr has to do some housekeeping.

Dârujan is in trouble.

Some letters home are in order.

Azruhâr's mind is quite occupied, thank you very much.

CW for non-graphic mentions of contagious sickness (bacterial gastroenteritis).

Lord Herucalmo comes to the morgue. Long and convoluted talking ensues. There even is an f-bomb. Oh dear.

Not a fun chapter despite the fun chapter number. My apologies.


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Roitaheru might prefer not to know the story, once he knows it. But it's definitely better that he's aware of what really happened.

Herucalmo probably didn't realise something like this might happen when he put it in the record, but at least he knew he needed to cover Azruhâr's back just in case. He's probably more mortified about the risk he's put Azruhâr in than he is about the destruction of the bodies...

Azruhâr continues trying to do the right thing. He probably can't quite believe that it turned out for the best this time!

Oh, ouch!

I had forgotten about that particular looming problem and now it has taken such a particularly bad turn!

Roitaheru's reaction seems to show him as an admirably staunch ally, but I hope he also takes the rest of those revelations in his stride.

So had I! But when I remembered, I finally knew how to continue the story, so I suppose we need to be grateful for it.

Roitaheru has a very long stride, but it probably going to shake him a little. I mean, it'll confirm his view of the court in Armenelos as a pit of vipers, but so far, he thought the king was above that. It might make him feel a little conflicted about letting his son marry right back into the royal line, but he's also very pragmatic, so he'll make his peace with it...

This chapter was a roller-coaster of emotion for Azruhâr. The bodies sent home to Númenor had rotted. But Lord Roitaheru finds the note in the report that his son Lord Herucalmo had told the embalmer he would add (Azruhâr's objections to how the bodies were being transported). It could have been so much worse if Azruhâr was sent back for punishment. As Roitaheru doesn't want his son to be in trouble either, and Azruhâr refuses to pass the blame to his own workers, the Lord will say that the error came out of his orders. In return Roitaheru wants the story of how and why Azruhâr became an embalmer and enemy of the King. Fantastic.