Elemental Spirits by Beatrisu

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Fanwork Notes

The world through the eyes of Maedhros.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Maedhros likens some of his loved ones to the elements.

Major Characters: Fëanor, Fingon, Maedhros, Maglor, Nerdanel

Major Relationships:

Genre: General

Challenges: Four Elements

Rating: General

Warnings: Mature Themes
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 176
Posted on 31 January 2012 Updated on 31 January 2012

This fanwork is a work in progress.

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Table of Contents

Chapter 1

Nerdanel.

Comments on Elemental Spirits

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I like the sense of strength you convey in Nerdanel! She seems very much the immovable object to Feanor's unstoppable force. 

I liked these lines:

"He'd see her move around stone, lifting the chisel, then lowering it before taking a step back and squinting."

"...but she had furrowed her brow which she so often did around him, as if to tell him to think back a few steps before he did something rash and foolish."

They make it sound like Nerdanel is really someone who considers small details, and really thinks about all the consequences of an action, before and after.