A Warning Denied by Kaylee Arafinwiel

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Fanwork Notes

 For the SWG prompt from October 2005, “A young messenger from Himring arrives in Doriath, bearing word from the Sons of Fëanor that they will attack if Dior does not return to them the Silmaril.”

 Telpeher/Celebrindor son of Celebrimbor is mine and Emma's OC, as Tolkien never said Celebrimbor had children. Then again, he never said Celebrimbor didn't, either. I got the name from one of my Atto Fiondil's ficlets, though the fates of his Celebrindor and ours are quite different.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Dior was forewarned. Unfortunately, forewarned doesn’t mean ready to listen…

 

Major Characters: Dior, Eluréd, Elurín, Elves, Elwing

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: General

Challenges:

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Violence (Mild)

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 440
Posted on 26 November 2017 Updated on 26 November 2017

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Chapter 1

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“No.

 

Telpeher took a step back, pressing against the wall of the King’s audience chamber and eyeing the Eluchil warily. The King’s grey eyes were stormy, though he didn’t seem to be angry with the youngster – rather, with his lords. Nevertheless, Telpeher let out a rather unseemly squeak. He barely noticed the tiny children playing in a corner of the room, but the noise had caught their attention.

 

“Er…Sire?”

 

“No, I said.” The King’s gaze softened only marginally, and he frowned. “I hear your message, but you will return to your lords forthwith, and tell them my answer. The Silmaril will never be theirs.”

 

Telpeher swallowed. “If…if that is your answer, Eluchil, then know my lords mean to…. take it by force.”

“We can defend ourselves, and will. I am the Aran Beleriand. I am the blood of Melian. I will not be cowed by Kinslayers.” Dior strode across the room and gathered his infant daughter up, his twin sons clinging to his legs as he turned to face the young Noldo again.

 

Telpeher wondered if the Eluchil saw the irony in those words, for a Kinslayer the Sinda would be if he spilled elven blood.

 

“Then by your leave, I will return to my—to my lords.”

 

“To your daeradar, and your uncles.” Dior stared into Telpeher’s frightened gaze. The youth, he knew, was in point of fact older than him, though it didn’t seem so. The light of majesty that shone from the Eluchil frightened the Elven lad.

 

“Yes,” Telpeher admitted.

 

“Then know this, Celebrindor son of Celebrimbor, grandson of Curufin Feanorion.” Dior said. “Your kin may claim the Silmaril all they like, but in the end, the Light belongs to Eru and none other, and I will fight to the end to see the holy light, and my people, defended.”

 

Celebrindor. Telpeher knew it was the Sindarin version of his name, but had not heard it commonly used. He would never admit it to the Eluchil, but he rather liked the sound of it.

 

“I understand, sire.”

 

“Then begone and…” The Eluchil’s eyes softened. “Eru grant that you, child, will stay well out of this.”

Celebrindor son of Celebrimbor dropped his gaze. “I will try.”

 

He bowed and departed swiftly, riding for Himring. His grandfather and great-uncles would be most wroth, and he hoped only that the target of their anger would not be himself – or the babes that had played at the Eluchil’s feet.

 

 

Unfortunately, he knew better, and squirmed in anticipation of his Uncle Caranthir’s…attentions.  It would be a most uncomfortable homecoming.

 


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The prelude to war.

And poor Telpeher/Celebrindor has the unfortunate task of delivering an ultimatum. It seems to me he really doesn't want to be involved.

Especially with the idea of facing the wrath of one uncle Caranthir. 

This is a very interesting idea to explore, Celebrindor, son of Celebrimbor.

Are there any other stories of yours with this wonderful character Celebrindor? If not, would you consider writing more on him and life with his father and great uncles? If not that's okay. I'll understand.

Thank you for sharing.

Hello Gabriel! Thank you very much for your much appreciated review. :) 

As it happens, I haven't published anything else with Telpeher/Celebrindor yet, though he does feature in an AU Greenwood tale of mine and my co-author Emma's that we've still got in draft form, not written up properly yet. 

The idea for a Celebrindor, son of Celebrimbor, however, must be credited to my beloved late mentor/father figure Fiondil, who wrote an encounter between Aragorn and the spirit of Celebrindor son of Celebrimbor. Other than the name and parentage, our characters aren't the same; they have different fates and I've no inkling that Atto Fiondil intended his Celebrindor to be born this early. I think his Celebrindor was born in Eregion.