Beneath the Sickle's Swing by Clodia
Fanwork Notes
Disclaimer: I am not J.R.R. Tolkien, nor do I make anything from this but my own entertainment.
Fanwork Information
Summary: A collection of drabbles found in the ruins of Utumno during the years of Melkor's captivity, written for various 6. After the Manner: Orcs, one drabble.
Major Characters: Erestor, Original Character(s), Thuringwethil Major Relationships: Challenges: Rating: Teens Warnings: Violence (Mild) |
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Chapters: 6 | Word Count: 1, 366 |
Posted on 10 February 2011 | Updated on 26 June 2011 |
This fanwork is a work in progress. |
Beneath the Sickle's Swing
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Beneath the Sickle's Swing
Ice and Snow
Smoke there was once, smoke in great billows and a blaze of fire belching out of bottomless caverns. Torches burned between chains. There was heat infernal and an infernal host among ragged shadows ebbed and flowed, crying praises to the majesty of our Dark Lord. The iron of the vaults and the topless turrets glowed cherry-red against endless night.
Then the Breaking came, and the Chaining. Then the turrets fell and the vaults were opened and the flames quenched. Then the Lord left, and dark was upon us.
Now where smoke was once, and fire, lies only ice and snow.
Thirst
Written for tolkien_weekly's Water Challenge.
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Thirst
Puddles
Thuringwethil:
– fighting and losing, losing terribly, a sea of smoke and fire – lightning vivid, a hammer shattering the dark – and bodies falling all around, the smash of iron and thunder, her ears assailed by screams –
– the Dark Lord on his knees, terrible in defeat –
– she took to wing. Not her huge, ragged wings that blotted out the stars, but wings soft and dark, mere tissues of skin. They were fighting and falling. She darted through the broken night.
Finally silence fell. Still she trembled in her lair. She was so thirsty.
Blood dripped through rent iron, puddling on ruined stone.
Dreaming
Fountains
For so long, she lived off the blood of the battle: droplets spilt on stained stone, spattered across ruined walls. She fluttered between broken and rusting spires. The pits lay open, all but the deepest, and everywhere was treacherous: an upheaval of jagged slabs and gaping vaults and the corpses of the dishonoured dead. It was all frozen, all frosted over beneath that terrible white starlight: there was snow and the blood was black ice on the ground.
She licked it liquid, her tongue lapping fearfully at cold stone and metal. Sleeping, she dreamt of warm bodies and red fountains.
Sal(i)vation
River
She heard their heartbeats first.
It had been so long. So long enduring in a frozen tyranny of silence. Flapping among starlit shadows, she heard pounding, drumlike through dark air, and thought at once of armies. In panic, she fled for the rusting iron of her lair.
She clung trembling to a spike. Slowly, so slowly, the drums approached...
Two of them. Only two. She heard their hearts and their footsteps, soft on feathered hoarfrost. She heard the hiss of their exhalation freezing on their lips. She heard the roar of red rivers pumping through narrow channels, and she salivated.
Anticipation
Lake
From black wells of shadow to star-frosted perches she fluttered, drawn irresistibly after heart-drums. Fearfully, thirstily, on silent wings: following wisps of body heat, of animal scent, traces of disturbed dark. Such creatures there had been before... penned up in the vaults, stinking herds of them... bleeding and wailing and breeding brutal children for the Lord’s flesh-and-bone hosts...
She remembered luring them to Him, those creatures. She had been mighty then.
One of them crouched below her, alone. Black ropes of hair fell away from its white neck. She saw herself falling ravenously upon it, flesh tearing, spilling scarlet lakes.
Frustration
Lake
Her perch was icy under her claws. She dropped without a second thought. Her meal awaited below: blood, so much warm blood, liquid and lappable, sweet from the source, the first in a hundred revolutions of the stars. So thirsty, so very thirsty. The dark rushed up around her. She fell –
– and found herself drowning in a lake of cloth.
It smelled maddeningly of meat. She struggled wildly against dryness, screaming her fury and fear.
The prison’s soft folds fell open; she hurled herself blind into the Sickle’s brilliance. The words flew after her: “So it was only a bat!”
Patience
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Patience
The Sea
Only a bat.
So much more she had been, so much greater, before the Lord had gone over the Sea. So fierce in her hunger, so huge in her anger. She had sailed through endless night like the Dark Lord’s rage. Such creatures had fled screaming from the ragged shadow of her wings.
Resentful, Thuringwethil tracked the intruders to the rim of a broken stone staircase descending into the deeps of the pits. Frost glittered on the first step.
She settled under a nearby ledge and folded her wings around herself. She could wait. When they emerged...
... if they emerged...
Those Unhappy Ones
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Those Unhappy Ones
Comb
Orcs:
Long ago, the world ended.
It ended in ice and stillness. There had been light: it was put out. There had been fire: it was extinguished. There had been screaming: it was silenced. There had been anguish: it lessened. There had been unending torment: it ended. There had been slavery: the chains were broken. There had been slave-drivers: they fell flaming. There had been an uncountable host: its remnants fled to hiding-places, scattered and afraid.
There had been prisons. Now there were ruins. The survivors combed through the wreckage and told dark tales of the world before its end.
The Hideous Race
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Maker of Misery
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“Pain and terror. That’s how He cut us out of quivering flesh – our Master, the Dark Lord...”
His shadow splashed huge against the broken wall. An uneasy whisper flickered round his little audience. He grinned at them, showing off his yellowed tusks.
The noise from the back cell had quietened. She had been screaming since three-meals-past and was weakening; he could hear her sobs. He shifted on his haunches and lowered his voice. “Taller’n towers, He was. We were slaves then. Born by the knife to die by it, we were. When the end came, we died... and He fell.”
Deep in Their Dark Hearts
Condition
“Hungry?” Vigorous nods from his scrawny audience. “Weren’t no hunger then. There was meat for the taking. ’Course, you had to take it. Had to wrench it from the bone, still on its owner, often enough. Still yelling, still fighting, ’cause only the strong survive. Orcish condition, that is. Down in the Deeps where the Master made us, weren’t no cold, no quiet, no stars...”
He sat back. Darkness pooled beyond the flickering fire. Far overhead, starlight leaked through a frozen crack in the vault. All was still.
“Ain’t none of that now,” he said. “He’s gone. The Deeps’re ours.”
Divers Shapes and Kinds
Curl
The silence had gone on too long. “Hey, Curly,” he said. “Go check out back.”
He didn’t wait for Curly’s footsteps to fade. “There were others, ’course. Dark fiery spirits with burning whips. Wolves bigger’n Orcs, and not all beasts all of the time. Things like bats, but a thousand times bigger, with claws and teeth. Patrolling the Deeps and the Pits and Up Above, minding His business, holding our chains. His knives. Our makers. And here’s the thing.”
He paused.
“When the end came, not all of ’em fell. Some ran. They’re still here in the Deeps with us.”
The Hideous Race
Plait
“Down by the ice river, when it’s snowing and the stars are dark, the wolves go hunting.” He was mostly talking to fill the uneasy quiet now. “Used to be, Othrod’s gang lived south of here. Then a yellow-eyed wolf strolled in on its hind-legs –”
A shadow loomed out of the back cell: Curly, waving urgently. He leapt to his feet.
There was blood everywhere. She was awash with sweat, white as a day-old corpse on the ratty blankets. But her greasy plaits were bunched over her shoulder, clutched in the plump fist of the babe snug in her arms.
After the Manner
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After the Manner
Parting
So small, this new girl-child of his. Her downy hair was crisp with drying blood. He held her cradled in the crook of his arm and combed carefully through stiffening strands, thinking of the girl who’d gone to Othrod’s boy, long ago.
Her mother looked on with glazed eyes. She was in a fever already. He saw another parting coming, the hardest of all.
One more, he’d said. One more, when Othrod’s gang went to the wolves. One more might cost him both of them. A babe needed a mother’s milk.
Curly tugged at his elbow. “Da, what’s she called?”
(1) Comment by Himring for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 2]
I had really not expected ever to be made to feel sorry for Thuringwethil... Poor little megalomaniac bloodthirsty bat!
Re: (1) Comment by Himring for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 2]
Heh, others have said that... I've really had fun playing with Thuringwethil here! It's been a nice (if a shade grisly) change from my usual Elves. Thank you for reading. :)
(2) Comment by Himring for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 5]
Awesome! Special thank to Ignoble Bard, if he spurred you on to write this. I still can't quite believe you got this out of a Hairdressing challenge!
Re: (2) Comment by Himring for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 5]
Thanks so much! To be honest, this sort of non-Tolkien-specific challenge is quite straightforward - but I skipped the one before it, which was a 'dangerous beasts' challenge: you'd think it might be easier, but working in dragons and wargs before they're meant to have been bred was more of a challenge than I was up for just then...
(3) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Swing
This was very evocative. Actually, I felt as if I was there (which probably isn't too good, I think, since it was such a dark, horrible place ;)). Very skillfully written, and the last line's contrast was very efffective. Well done!
Re: (3) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Swing
Thank you! I am about to flood your inbox with replies, I think, so sorry for that - but thanks for all your lovely reviews! They have cheered me remarkably. ;)
I have been having fun playing with a distinct change of tone from the usual stuff with this set. At some point I realised I'd been spending too much time lately writing Elves being nostalgic and wistful, so thought I'd try the same thing with a different group of characters. So this descent into a dark, horrible place...
(4) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 3]
Chilling! The threat that's lurking in the dark seems palpable. Very well done!
Re: (4) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 3]
Thank you! I'm very glad it worked. There's plenty of nasty things down there - and Thuringwethil still waiting for when they come up - so I think they're going to have to run...
(5) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 4]
I love the cadence of this one. And the stark realization that their fate changed so much, too. What a clever use of the prompt. Excellent!
Re: (5) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 4]
Thank you! I do like pulling back to this distant, impersonal perspective - it's a rather odd tone and you can't get away with too much of it, but it's nice to play.
(6) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 6]
This was so sad and so... human. Beautifully done!
Re: (6) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 6]
I am so glad you found it so. Once again, thank you for all your reviews! <3
(7) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 5]
This is an awesome set of most impressive and vividly written drabbles! It must have been both a challenge and a kind of blessing to gain freedom from Melkor (for a time, though) and still with all those beasts lurking around.
Mastefully drabbled! *bows*
Re: (7) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 5]
Thank you so much! That combination of a challenge and a blessing was really what I wanted here - I'm so glad it came across. And so glad you've enjoyed the set! I do appreciate it and am definitely spurred to get on with it as soon as I can (you are an awesome cheerleader, really! <3).
(8) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 2]
Yep, that's what I think a vampire might have thought, felt, and imagined. Poor beast, though. Loved the descriptive language of these pieces. Excellent!
Re: (8) Comment by Robinka for Beneath the Sickle's Sw... [Ch 2]
Thank you! I am glad you liked this. I think this might be the first vampire I've ever written - she was a fun departure!