Tengwar Acrostics by Himring

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Fanwork Notes

Prompt fills for the following tengwar: malta (gold), hwesta (breeze), tinco (metal), calma (lamp).

The second ficlet contains a short poem (the lullaby of the title).

As acrostics, these are also prompt fills for the tolkienshortfanworks challenge for May.

The fourth acrostic was written for Tolkien Ekphrasis Week (Day 1: Ceramics and Glasswork) and cross-posted after it had been revealed for that challenge on AO3.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Responses to the Tengwar Challenge in which first letters spell out the name of a tengwa: 1) Early Encounter (Nerdanel, Indis); 2) Numenorean Lullaby (Almarian, Aldarion); 3) Tink-Tink (Telchar); 4) Such lamps as once shone in Khazad-dum (Celebrimbor).

Major Characters: Almarian, Celebrimbor, Indis, Nerdanel, Tar-Aldarion, Telchar

Major Relationships:

Genre: Family, Ficlet, Fluff, Poetry

Challenges: Tengwar

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 4 Word Count: 334
Posted on 17 May 2024 Updated on 15 June 2024

This fanwork is complete.

Early Encounter

An early encounter between Queen Indis and Nerdanel.

Acrostic for malta (gold)

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Mahtan was carefully, unhurriedly, twisting gold wire into a delicate coronet.

All eyes in the workshop were on him but he was not distracted, being entirely focused on his work.

Little Lalwen laughed delightedly to see the promised ornament taking shape and clapped her hands.

Tall, golden-haired Indis smiled down at Mahtan’s daughter, lurking in a corner and watching, and asked: ‘Would you like one, too?’

‘A coronet—no, thank you, I just want to learn how to make them!’


Chapter End Notes

These two were friends, despite the tension between Indis and Nerdanel's future husband. Perhaps they already liked each other before all that? 

Numenorean Lullaby

Almarian, wife of the Crown Prince of Numenor, sings a lullaby to her children.

Acrostic: hwesta (breeze)

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Almarian sang:

‘Hush!
West wind
eases.
South wind
teases.
All good children sleep.’

Sadly, neither of her children showed the desire to be good. That is, Anardil was looking outright mulish, probably considering himself to be too old and above such things as lullabies. Ailinel was just lying quietly among her pillows, but her eyes were wide open.

Almarian sighed softly. It was no surprise really. It had been such a hot day, even in the Forostar, that the evening breeze revived rather than soothed.


Chapter End Notes

Almarian canonically has three children, but Almiel is not born yet. Before Almarian's husband ascended the throne, he chose to live in the north of Numenor (Forostar). 

Tink-Tink

Telchar making a famous sword, in the deeps of time.

Acrostic: tinco (metal)

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Tink-Tink—Telchar pounds away, deep in his cave.

In the meantime, outside, the world changes.

Now he is making a sword; now he is pouring flame; now flickering fire first runs along its edge.

Choose who the original owner is, who commissioned it—we do not know.

Oblivious, Telchar is not thinking of them, only of making Narsil the best of blades.


Chapter End Notes

A bit of influence here from Mim's Klage (Mim's Complaint) and The Hoard.

Such lamps as once shone in Khazad-dum

Celebrimbor makes a gift for Narvi.

Acrostic: calma (lamp)

Read Such lamps as once shone in Khazad-dum

Celebrimbor put the finishing touches on the simple filigree and lit the small lantern for the first time to test the effect.

Amethyst and rose, light filtered through delicate runes etched into its five panes.

Lights a-plenty Khazad-dum had already, certainly, magnificent dwarf-made ones, in shining lamps of crystal hewn!

More were not needed, especially no contributions from elves, some grumpy elder might mutter, but Narvi would disagree, Celebrimbor hoped.

An anniversary like theirs—twenty years since their first meeting—deserved to be celebrated with a gift and Celebrimbor had just the right nook in Narvi’s favourite cave in mind.


Chapter End Notes

The title alludes to Gimli's speech about the Glittering Caves; apart from referring to the lamps of Moria, this part also gave me the idea that Celebrimbor's lamp is intended to light a particular location in a favourite cave. 

The text of this drabble also contains a quotation from Gimli's "Song of Durin".

The five initial letters bolded in the text spell out "calma", the Quenya word for lamp and also the name of the Tengwa. However, I deliberately made Celebrimbor etch dwarvish runes into those glass panes, not tengwar. The word "calma" has five letters but, for the number of the panes, it is more important that the name "Narvi" also has five.

Glasswork was one of the themes for Ekphrasis Week 1. The idea that this might be a glass lamp was suggested to me for the Tengwar prompt fill for calma by Tehta, but as Tehta herself pointed out, when we talked about it, glass lamps do exist. Indeed, they are much more common than Feanorian lamps...

100 words in MS Word


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Oooh, don't see these two interact much early on, I love this as a choice!  And well done on the acrostic :)

I quite like that lullaby!  But I also deeply sympathize with the inability to sleep when it's too hot. Uuugh!

Little (medium) Nerdanel avidly watching her dad to learn is such a mood, as is the idea of her relationship with Indis starting so early on. (Maybe Indis introduced them?)

As far as we know, she doesn't go in for making jewellery later, much, but I'm sure medium Nerde would want to learn *all the things* from her dad!

If Indis did introduce Nerdanel to Feanor, that would be one way of setting up a comedy-of-manners-type romance of initial misunderstandings... I haven't actually got a fixed head-canon about their first meeting and enjoy reading all kinds of scenarios!

 

oh I LOVE this!  That second line especially for two reasons: because when one is deep into the creative process it is so very easy to lose track of everything else, but also the way you worded it makes it feel like Telchar was down there for years just focused so entirely on this piece that whole aspects of the world changed and he didn't even know.

Imagining him blinking into the sun for the first time and being like "what the hell happened up here?!  How long was I down there!?!"

<3 <3 <3

Thank you!

This is a piece in which I only gradually figured out what I was writing about as I was composing it.

But yes, I really was going for that feeling.

It occurred to me, some way through, that the reason why we are never told about the original commissioner or first intended owner is not only that Telchar forgot about them while he was working, but perhaps something happened while he was working that meant they did not receive Narsil when it was finished...