Instadrabbles (delayed dribbles) by 0ur_Ouroboros

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Fanwork Information

Summary:

A selection of brief writings (mostly conforming to drabbles but some veer into dribble territory) from the SWG events on January 18-19, 2025.

Major Characters: Elrond, Elros, Maedhros, Maglor, Orcs, Elves, Beren, Lúthien Tinúviel, Celebrimbor, Sauron, Fëanor, Fingolfin

Major Relationships: Elrond & Elros & Maedhros & Maglor, Beren/Luthien, Celebrimbor/Sauron, Fëanor & Fingolfin

Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet

Challenges: Holiday Party, Jubilee, Restoration and Rebuilding, Revolution, Teen Spirit

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Mature Themes, Violence (Mild)

This fanwork belongs to the series

Chapters: 10 Word Count: 1, 233
Posted on 19 January 2025 Updated on 19 January 2025

This fanwork is a work in progress.

Food and drink (she brings the plate)

Read Food and drink (she brings the plate)

The twins are led to a strange room and seated at the table. Elrond looks around as he recognizes what must be a once-great dining hall in Amon Ereb. There are cracks in the wall where moss is growing. Elros just stares at the plate and fiddles with his napkin. 

After a time, Maedhros and Maglor enter and take their seats, avoiding eye contact with the boys, and it seems, each other. 

A woman whom Elrond recognizes from the kitchen brings a plate of what looks to be overcooked pork. 

“What’s that?” he asks.

“Horse,” Maedhros says, taking a large bite.

Maglor laughs. Elros wretches. 

 

 


Chapter End Notes

Sorry about that.


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A sky full of stars (is not enough)

Read A sky full of stars (is not enough)

“Should we try to escape now?” Elros looks over at Maedhros and Maglor, finally asleep around the fire.

“Where would we even go?” It is more a statement than a question. Elrond looks up at the night sky, prompting Elros to do the same. 

“Think we’ll ever see them again?” Elrond says, after a time. 

“I guess we’ll see him every night,” Elros murmurs.

 It isn’t enough.

 

 


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Restoration (a smile can do that?)

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He embraces pain and cold; he worships at their altar. But this time they are blinding. He looks down to see the blade, glowing blue, casting a curious light straight through him.

Then there is nothing.

And yet—

He feels it more than anything. A voice that beckons, a caress on his cheek and on his head gentle as summer breeze.

He is beyond thought, beyond knowledge, and still he knows to follow.

Light takes shape around a room. He looks down at his hands and his mouth gapes. They are clean, whole, each finger the same on both sides. He flexes them a little.  He feels strong. And something else too. Good

“What is this place?” As soon as it leaves his mouth he has the curious thought that he’s asking it of no one and everything at the same time.

“A place for restoration.” The same voice, that presence. He looks then, and sees the shadow that somehow is also a god.

“Stay as long as you need,”’ and the smile embraces him.

A smile can do that? He thinks. I have much to learn. 


Chapter End Notes

All orcs go to Mandos too. If they accept.


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Hurt, delusions, tandem, fly

Read Hurt, delusions, tandem, fly

She expects it to hurt, and if death be her reward, in the afterlife she will join her kin, all notes in Melkor’s choir.

For well has she listened to his Lieutenant’s speeches; her heart knows with each rushing beat of black blood that the more painful her death in righteous battle against the Western enemy, the greater the portion of horsemeat and Noldor blood-wine she can expect at the eternal banquet table.

She rushes against the colonizers whose swords glowing blue - the mark of true evil (so diligently does she recall his Lieutenant’s lesson).

She follows her brother and sisters against them in tandem, and falls on their weapons. No matter, she thinks. 

Her blood mingles with the others’, she closes her eyes. 

She soon will fly to glory, in service of the true lord of Arda.


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The cure for anything is salt water (sweat, tears, or the sea)

Read The cure for anything is salt water (sweat, tears, or the sea)

Maglor wanders the shore and inhales its salt-water scent in the mornings. He finds comfort in this routine, while weeks, years, or perhaps ages pass him over. Pass him through, he thinks, as a sound that could pass for laughter escapes him.

At times, he thinks, better the wound had not healed at all, that his flesh still wept fresh from the burn: a reason for his tears. A meaning. 

For where reason and meaning lead, he thinks, an ending must follow.

Yet watching his hands move under sea-water, he feels no pain. 

In his flesh, long-healed, only numbness remains. 

 


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Hunger (we wake under this spacious sky)

Prompt: selection from the song "Hunger" by Robinson and Rohe, here covered by Vienna Teng. https://www.youtube.com/clip/UgkxdmKnTgORu9DccoJeItBrYrMR1P5sMylB

> Though the ink is running dry, we still insist to write upon the sky

> Oh, this spacious sky

> Is not poetry enough for our swelling lungs

> We must write a thousand songs to carry on our tongues

> Our thoughts will burn so bright we can white the stars out from the sky at night

> And we wonder if our love will endure the certain pain

> And if this land can withstand the endless strain of our hunger

 

 

Read Hunger (we wake under this spacious sky)

Long limbs stretch their first, skin-shades blend, as they strain with hunger,

all reaching up

   and out. 

       Bright eyes blink open.

 

Thoughts burning bright, their greeting: the stars. 

    The sky at night.

 

Lungs swell with new breath, fresh mouths open and a thousand tiny songs emerge,  

carried on unsteady tongues.

 

It takes no words to wonder, to love. Land can withstand them, 

   say the endless stars, above 

 

 


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Teen spirit (names of our own)

Conflicts: peer pressure

Themes: self-acceptance

Stock characters: social justice activist

LGBTQA+: new names

 

 

Read Teen spirit (names of our own)

“Have ye ‘eard o’ this thing? Ever ‘eard of a ‘name?’” The kitchen orc whispers as she stirs elf-meat stew. The recent skirmish, where the beautiful one with flame-red braids was captured, caused the hearts of Angband’s working class to swell. All stomachs would be full tonight. Her crooked mouth cocks a smile at her sister, busy preparing elf-bone broth beside her.

“A ‘name?’ What in the void does’at mean?”

“A word of yer own. Belongs t’ ye.. But others can say it, if ye let ‘em.”

“Yer own, y’say? What on Melkor’s taint y’talking ‘bout?”

“Aye, ye get it at birth, and later too. The beautiful one says it, they says, the proud one we caught and took ‘is hair right off. Says ‘is is Nelyafin-somethin’ er other.”

“Can y’pick yer own?”

“Ask ‘em, how should I know?”

 

The beautiful one teaches his name, and a stirring occurs. 

Morgoth’s thralls each want one of their own.

 

 


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Anthem (how we get the lights out)

Verses from Leonard Cohen, “Anthem”

Ah, the wars they will be fought again

The holy dove, she will be caught again

Bought and sold, and bought again

The dove is never free

 

Ring the bells that still can ring

Forget your perfect offering

There is a crack, a crack in everything

That's how the light gets in

 

 

Read Anthem (how we get the lights out)

Beren wraps his arms around Lúthien and inhales the scent of her skin, her hair. “My dove, my light,” he murmurs, moving her hair aside to place kisses along her nape. 

“Are we fools enough to attempt this task? When death comes for me, may it be swift, may it buy you time for escape. When you return to your father, tell him then that I could not afford your bride-price after all. He will have to try to sell you again.” 

“If a fool is among us, then it is only my father,” she says, leaning into his touch.

“But I have a plan. Listen.” Beren thinks he could do nothing else. 

“Morgoth has a weakness, a crack, the birds have told me. I will go to him, a perfect offering, my song ringing bells. He will accept, he will forget, and he will sleep. You see, there is a crack, a crack in everything. That’s how we’ll get the lights out.”

“These lights I hate more than Morgoth himself, though your father values them more than you. More than your life, it seems.”

“That is a war we will fight again. But later. Now, prepare for Angband.”

 


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Beauties, terrors, sun, power

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“My brave, beautiful Tyelpë,” Annatar’s voice is an oozing wound. He strokes the elven-smith’s cheek and tucks a fraying braid behind his ear. 

The Lord of Eregion, once so proud and beloved, hangs his head and attempts once more to free his fëa. To send it keening toward the sun.

But he only feels the terror and dark power of the man-who-is-not-a-man gripping him. And as that beautiful skin-suit of false promises and filth touches his face, it binds his fëa to the cold ground of his flesh.

“Not yet, my ring-maker, my sun. Not yet.”

 


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Kneeling (my sword, your throat)

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Kneel,” he said, his voice keening. The spirit of fire snarls and has the nerve to hesitate before raising his eyes to meet the other’s. And so slowly, so deliberately does he then bend one knee, and the other, before he raises his hands in the universal gesture.  A mockery of submission.

“Fine move, brother,” he says. 

“Foul is one who turns that into a curse.”

“The foulest,” the spirit of fire says, eyes narrowing.

 


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What a wonderful collection of drabbles! I really enjoyed your way of writing. It’s difficult to choose a favourite, but perhaps it’s Teen spirit (names of our own) with a fascinating plot idea. And your silvergifting piece was utterly heartbreaking. And the last one, wow.